for Slice Provocation, Kiss Defeat7/28/2006 c1 nahjan
hey! great piece, although i must admit, i don't really understand the situation of that poem- do you mind explaining that further to me? but as always, you're the best- keep it up! ;)
hey! great piece, although i must admit, i don't really understand the situation of that poem- do you mind explaining that further to me? but as always, you're the best- keep it up! ;)
7/21/2006 c1 awais
i'm tired, it took so much of me to read that, anyway, u'r really good i must say, i'm reading the other ones aswell, pretty awesome for a 16 year old! :|
i'm tired, it took so much of me to read that, anyway, u'r really good i must say, i'm reading the other ones aswell, pretty awesome for a 16 year old! :|
7/21/2006 c1 rejaa
but i've read it before na...how am i supposed to review smething i've read before?fine...absolutely superb, a work of art if u ask me. you, my friend, are a true poet in the making...
but i've read it before na...how am i supposed to review smething i've read before?fine...absolutely superb, a work of art if u ask me. you, my friend, are a true poet in the making...
7/21/2006 c1 
34C.J. Mahan
extremely well written, but if you're feeling anything at all like this then you're overlooking the very good thing that you are an extremely talented writer.
34C.J. Mahanextremely well written, but if you're feeling anything at all like this then you're overlooking the very good thing that you are an extremely talented writer.