for Small Tokens8/7/2006 c1 
3x-o-x-BEAR-x-o-x
hey lady.it's a tad bit upset-sounding, but that's okay. it's still pretty darn good. :P and i like the rhythm.,
3x-o-x-BEAR-x-o-xhey lady.it's a tad bit upset-sounding, but that's okay. it's still pretty darn good. :P and i like the rhythm.,
7/22/2006 c1 Zephyr Tenshi
Like I said before...this is a great piece of work! You know that you have a gift for writing poetry...a whole hell of a lot better than I am...that is why I stopped writing poetry in high school...keep it up!
Like I said before...this is a great piece of work! You know that you have a gift for writing poetry...a whole hell of a lot better than I am...that is why I stopped writing poetry in high school...keep it up!
7/21/2006 c1 8incandescente
i'm not much of a poet critic. however i did enjoy your poem; if it was dedicated to me, i'd feel very really touched! however in the fourth stanza, i was wondering, does that mean that the persona dont want to shed her tears in front of her friends? i was just wondering. perhpas i got the interpretation wrong..anyway. continue writing!
8incandescentei'm not much of a poet critic. however i did enjoy your poem; if it was dedicated to me, i'd feel very really touched! however in the fourth stanza, i was wondering, does that mean that the persona dont want to shed her tears in front of her friends? i was just wondering. perhpas i got the interpretation wrong..anyway. continue writing!