for Stranded8/4/2006 c5 
19toxic-noodle725
hey i wanna hear the questions!:(oh well its ur story. anyway im bored so update soon!
19toxic-noodle725hey i wanna hear the questions!:(oh well its ur story. anyway im bored so update soon!
8/3/2006 c5 Simply-Serena
YAY YAY YAY YAY! i can not wait until you update ! this is very well written and i like this... will kyla and mia get in to a war over corey what will become of steve?
YAY YAY YAY YAY! i can not wait until you update ! this is very well written and i like this... will kyla and mia get in to a war over corey what will become of steve?
8/3/2006 c5 2cutebut3vil
OMG i love it you have to update soon. u have a great way of writing. please quick put the next chapter up! lol
2cutebut3vilOMG i love it you have to update soon. u have a great way of writing. please quick put the next chapter up! lol
8/3/2006 c5 26invisible.writer
I like the general idea of this story - it's rather unique. One thing I did note, however, was that they were watching the sun set when Mia went to explore. The jungle, any jungle is rather dense, so I'm assuming that she wouldn't be able to see her way around, much less find an old hut. Perhaps if you set it in the afternoon, it would provide more time for her discovery. Interesting so far, and this Steve character seems quite shifty. I'm intrigued by this new species as well. Please continue!
26invisible.writerI like the general idea of this story - it's rather unique. One thing I did note, however, was that they were watching the sun set when Mia went to explore. The jungle, any jungle is rather dense, so I'm assuming that she wouldn't be able to see her way around, much less find an old hut. Perhaps if you set it in the afternoon, it would provide more time for her discovery. Interesting so far, and this Steve character seems quite shifty. I'm intrigued by this new species as well. Please continue!
8/3/2006 c5 19jekodama
hahaha! great chapter! I didn't remember about that Corey Mathews character on Boy Meets World! I loved that show! lol
I forgot to tell you why I thought that the first chapter was stressful for me: Some years ago I went sailing with some friends on a boat, and a storm caught us out in the open sea. It was terrifying, and your description made me kind of re-live the whole experience. It was kind of a catartic thing, though...
Well, I hope to read more of this soon!
Until the next review!
19jekodamahahaha! great chapter! I didn't remember about that Corey Mathews character on Boy Meets World! I loved that show! lol
I forgot to tell you why I thought that the first chapter was stressful for me: Some years ago I went sailing with some friends on a boat, and a storm caught us out in the open sea. It was terrifying, and your description made me kind of re-live the whole experience. It was kind of a catartic thing, though...
Well, I hope to read more of this soon!
Until the next review!
7/28/2006 c4 19toxic-noodle725
dude the first chapter was fuckin scary! man and i dont know how to swim. hey isnt corey matthews that dude from boy meets world? oh well. that kyla girl annoys me. so im likin this story though i do hope it wont be like gilligans island or sumthin. update!
19toxic-noodle725dude the first chapter was fuckin scary! man and i dont know how to swim. hey isnt corey matthews that dude from boy meets world? oh well. that kyla girl annoys me. so im likin this story though i do hope it wont be like gilligans island or sumthin. update!
7/24/2006 c4 19jekodama
Don't worry! since it's a good story, I'll forgive you! But ONLY if you update soon! XD
19jekodamaDon't worry! since it's a good story, I'll forgive you! But ONLY if you update soon! XD
7/22/2006 c4 7VEH
I really like this story so far. I'm scared to go on a cruise or something, for fear that it'll sink, so this really doesn't help my phobia haha.
The only thing that bothers me is how you described the hurricane. I live in Florida, so I've experienced a lot of hurricanes... and... you can't actually physically see them. The black tunnel thing you described is more like a tornado, and those can't function over oceans, I'm pretty sure. Also, Hurricanes sometimes last over 5 days. They aren't an over-night kind of thing usually. Sorry if that was lengthy, just thought I'd point that out. :]
7VEHI really like this story so far. I'm scared to go on a cruise or something, for fear that it'll sink, so this really doesn't help my phobia haha.
The only thing that bothers me is how you described the hurricane. I live in Florida, so I've experienced a lot of hurricanes... and... you can't actually physically see them. The black tunnel thing you described is more like a tornado, and those can't function over oceans, I'm pretty sure. Also, Hurricanes sometimes last over 5 days. They aren't an over-night kind of thing usually. Sorry if that was lengthy, just thought I'd point that out. :]
7/22/2006 c4 kayttea
Oh. My. Gosh. YOU'RE JUST ENDING IT THERE! NO! ah, but it was so cool! EVIL CLIFFHANGER! it's like the mose evil cliffhanger I've ever read! this is great! I thought the 'bite' thing was a typo at first, lol, so that kinda confused me, but otherwise it was awesome! I like how Mia wants to be an author. =D please update stat and ASAP k? =) bye for now!
-kt
Oh. My. Gosh. YOU'RE JUST ENDING IT THERE! NO! ah, but it was so cool! EVIL CLIFFHANGER! it's like the mose evil cliffhanger I've ever read! this is great! I thought the 'bite' thing was a typo at first, lol, so that kinda confused me, but otherwise it was awesome! I like how Mia wants to be an author. =D please update stat and ASAP k? =) bye for now!
-kt
7/22/2006 c2 kayttea
Woa, this is really cool. Your a good writer! I wish there was another chapter... lol. Hey there is one... it doesn't have a title tho, maybe it's just my computer. o.O anyway, this is a really good story! update soon please. =)
Woa, this is really cool. Your a good writer! I wish there was another chapter... lol. Hey there is one... it doesn't have a title tho, maybe it's just my computer. o.O anyway, this is a really good story! update soon please. =)