for Brown Eyes5/12/2013 c30 foreternity
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wait why is aunt claire "almost horrified"? is it because shes surprised..? LOL OH WAIT MAYBEE SHES SURPRISEDHAPPPYYYY FOR THEMM! LOOL update soon pleaseeee!
JLKDAFJLSDJFLAJFAKSFDJLKAEJFLKASJFAJDSFL KJAHOLYYY UNICORNS U UPDATED OMFG THEY CONFESSEDD THEIR LOVE AGHGHHGHGHGHGH FINALLYLLYLYLYLYLYLYLYYL.
wait why is aunt claire "almost horrified"? is it because shes surprised..? LOL OH WAIT MAYBEE SHES SURPRISEDHAPPPYYYY FOR THEMM! LOOL update soon pleaseeee!
4/30/2013 c29 
1angel1818
I realise that the story is possibly about accepting, letting go and moving on...but I am desperately hoping that Dante and Cassidy end up together. I can't seem to accept that Dante's love for Laurita could prevail over what he had with Cassidy...it appears so unfair with the way Laurita pulled him in.
As you can see I'm very into the story and almost feel that the characters are out there somewhere in the real world. I have enjoyed most of your stories and hope that the next update will be very soon.
P.S (I do hope that Dante and Cassidy still only have eyes for each other)!
1angel1818I realise that the story is possibly about accepting, letting go and moving on...but I am desperately hoping that Dante and Cassidy end up together. I can't seem to accept that Dante's love for Laurita could prevail over what he had with Cassidy...it appears so unfair with the way Laurita pulled him in.
As you can see I'm very into the story and almost feel that the characters are out there somewhere in the real world. I have enjoyed most of your stories and hope that the next update will be very soon.
P.S (I do hope that Dante and Cassidy still only have eyes for each other)!
4/24/2013 c29 69AlysonSerenaStone
Update soon! You are too hard on yourself, because you really are a talented writer.
69AlysonSerenaStoneUpdate soon! You are too hard on yourself, because you really are a talented writer.
4/21/2013 c24 AlysonSerenaStone
Your writing reminds me a lot of Sarah Dessen. She's a really talented cliche writer, like you.
Your writing reminds me a lot of Sarah Dessen. She's a really talented cliche writer, like you.
4/18/2013 c29 Amazing Fuzzy Llamas
I love this so much! My FAVORITE! 3 Please continue writing! I love how Dante loves both Cassidy and Laurita, and how you can identify with Laurita's feelings easily. Awesome!
I love this so much! My FAVORITE! 3 Please continue writing! I love how Dante loves both Cassidy and Laurita, and how you can identify with Laurita's feelings easily. Awesome!
4/11/2013 c1 6BananaPhobia
This is just simply amazing. I love your writing style! Can't wait to see more.
6BananaPhobiaThis is just simply amazing. I love your writing style! Can't wait to see more.
4/9/2013 c29 it'syouandme
ahaha i have no difficulty picturing cassidy being so deadpan about sex! this was an amazing chapter. i loved the drama-especially the jealousy on dante's part!
ahaha i have no difficulty picturing cassidy being so deadpan about sex! this was an amazing chapter. i loved the drama-especially the jealousy on dante's part!
4/6/2013 c11 69AlysonSerenaStone
Great story! You're characters are really developed and you have a really good story line going here!
69AlysonSerenaStoneGreat story! You're characters are really developed and you have a really good story line going here!
3/29/2013 c29 SRS
Please update!
Please update!
3/29/2013 c29 1starlight91
This is not my first time reading this chapter, but I finally got around to reviewing! Cheers!
Anyway, the story is wayyyy too intense. Gives me a heart attack all the time. Dante and Cassidy...just... I don't even know. They so obviously care for each other, and I wish there was a better way for them to show that than outright hostility. And Laurita...oh god...another one of the many barriers between Dante and Cassidy. Although I am a bit confused with the plot, I think things will start to clear up as more chapters get uploaded. SPEAKING OF WHICH, please update soooooon! I'm dying on the inside. All this drama is actually killing me!
1starlight91This is not my first time reading this chapter, but I finally got around to reviewing! Cheers!
Anyway, the story is wayyyy too intense. Gives me a heart attack all the time. Dante and Cassidy...just... I don't even know. They so obviously care for each other, and I wish there was a better way for them to show that than outright hostility. And Laurita...oh god...another one of the many barriers between Dante and Cassidy. Although I am a bit confused with the plot, I think things will start to clear up as more chapters get uploaded. SPEAKING OF WHICH, please update soooooon! I'm dying on the inside. All this drama is actually killing me!
3/29/2013 c29 1MrsHellman
This is really good and it is certainly something I don't stumble upon on a weekly basis here on FP. I like your flow and your characterisation. I don't think I've ever read a story where the main characters have such a past as Dante and Cassidy. Very well done, I hope to see more from you.
1MrsHellmanThis is really good and it is certainly something I don't stumble upon on a weekly basis here on FP. I like your flow and your characterisation. I don't think I've ever read a story where the main characters have such a past as Dante and Cassidy. Very well done, I hope to see more from you.
3/27/2013 c29 CupsofTea
I introduced your story to my friend and I can say that we were both half way to tears after this chapter. At first I grudgingly liked Laurita and I'm going to be honest and say that I'm happy to have a reason to dislike her now. I don't know what else to say other than I'm looking forward to the next chapter and the ensuing drama! xx C.T
I introduced your story to my friend and I can say that we were both half way to tears after this chapter. At first I grudgingly liked Laurita and I'm going to be honest and say that I'm happy to have a reason to dislike her now. I don't know what else to say other than I'm looking forward to the next chapter and the ensuing drama! xx C.T