for Brown Eyes2/21/2013 c29 AbbeyXD
I'm really confused. So Dante loves her and she loves Dante but where does Laurita come into all of this?
Even though I love this story, I feel like it gets really confusing at times and that the characters some how end up making things more difficult for themselves :) but I hope you update soon!
I'm really confused. So Dante loves her and she loves Dante but where does Laurita come into all of this?
Even though I love this story, I feel like it gets really confusing at times and that the characters some how end up making things more difficult for themselves :) but I hope you update soon!
2/20/2013 c29 Reena
Now I just want Cassidy to have her second chance at love argh everything's been so sad for her...I like Rick but I still favor Dante more than Cassidy and Dante have is exquisite ppl hardly find their soulmate's and I hope they don't lose that over some accident caused in their past:(
Now I just want Cassidy to have her second chance at love argh everything's been so sad for her...I like Rick but I still favor Dante more than Cassidy and Dante have is exquisite ppl hardly find their soulmate's and I hope they don't lose that over some accident caused in their past:(
2/19/2013 c29 
2Lindsay Hawk
I loved the update! I know it may take a while to post new chapters, but it is ALWAYS worth the wait.
2Lindsay HawkI loved the update! I know it may take a while to post new chapters, but it is ALWAYS worth the wait.
2/18/2013 c29 beth
So in love with this story! It's my favourite on fictionpress. I absolutely love Cassidy and Dante's relationship, would love some more interacting between them in the next chapter. And oh man, Laurita.. what a bitch lol.
Please update real soon?! Xx
So in love with this story! It's my favourite on fictionpress. I absolutely love Cassidy and Dante's relationship, would love some more interacting between them in the next chapter. And oh man, Laurita.. what a bitch lol.
Please update real soon?! Xx
2/18/2013 c29 beth
LOVE IT
would love some more interaction between dante and cassidy in the next chapter!
and oh man laurita.. what a bitch lol.
please update soooon! xxx
LOVE IT
would love some more interaction between dante and cassidy in the next chapter!
and oh man laurita.. what a bitch lol.
please update soooon! xxx
2/18/2013 c29 EireGal
Just done a mammoth 29ch read from start to finish. Really a 7 year story lol. I liked the style and content but at times felt you rambled on a bit - sorry not very specific-. This last chapter I very much enjoyed, very tense and bitchy. I do hope you can tie up the lose ends of secondary characters before you finish.
Please update
Just done a mammoth 29ch read from start to finish. Really a 7 year story lol. I liked the style and content but at times felt you rambled on a bit - sorry not very specific-. This last chapter I very much enjoyed, very tense and bitchy. I do hope you can tie up the lose ends of secondary characters before you finish.
Please update
2/17/2013 c29 AnonymousReads
I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens next. Update soon. Please. :)
I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens next. Update soon. Please. :)
2/17/2013 c29 Katie
'Kay, Ricks getting really annoying. I realize that's part of the point, but could you maybe key him down a little. I know that adds to the drama and what-not, but sometimes we need just a little LESS drama, and a little more plot. I'm not saying this to be mean. Think of it as constructive criticism! ;)
'Kay, Ricks getting really annoying. I realize that's part of the point, but could you maybe key him down a little. I know that adds to the drama and what-not, but sometimes we need just a little LESS drama, and a little more plot. I'm not saying this to be mean. Think of it as constructive criticism! ;)
2/17/2013 c29 Fangalitious
I'm too lazy to sign in, but I just had to tell you how much I've loved this story! To say I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter would be the understatement of the century. Write soon!
I'm too lazy to sign in, but I just had to tell you how much I've loved this story! To say I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter would be the understatement of the century. Write soon!
2/17/2013 c29 blueberryoreo
Amazing chapter! :D Sorry too lazy to log in
Amazing chapter! :D Sorry too lazy to log in
2/17/2013 c29 ess3sandra
laurita feels more and more like a fake person, tried to be someone else so that dante would like her. damn. looking forward to see where this will lead!
laurita feels more and more like a fake person, tried to be someone else so that dante would like her. damn. looking forward to see where this will lead!
2/17/2013 c29 P
I honestly hate you sometimes.
I just spent the last hour and a half reading the story from the start again.
Gosh, I cried from Chapter 20 till 29; I never want to fall in love.
Why on Earth must your writing be so wonderful?
There wasn't a single mistake I could spot to distract me from falling deeper into the story. I hate sad stories, I honestly do!
But Brown Eyes... it's a work of art.
Love it till it honestly hurts, but then it's that way for all of your stories.
Do update soon, or I'll forget about the story till it appears in my email. I'll then click on it and start reading from the begining again, which will lead to more tears being shed.
I honestly hate you sometimes.
I just spent the last hour and a half reading the story from the start again.
Gosh, I cried from Chapter 20 till 29; I never want to fall in love.
Why on Earth must your writing be so wonderful?
There wasn't a single mistake I could spot to distract me from falling deeper into the story. I hate sad stories, I honestly do!
But Brown Eyes... it's a work of art.
Love it till it honestly hurts, but then it's that way for all of your stories.
Do update soon, or I'll forget about the story till it appears in my email. I'll then click on it and start reading from the begining again, which will lead to more tears being shed.
2/17/2013 c29 atlalok33
Alright, this is my favorite story on Fictionpress. I'm not exaggerating, or lying. This is really my favorite story. I would have wanted to see more face-to-face drama between Dante and Cassidy this chapter, but the drama with Laurita definitely made up for that. I think that in the next chapter Dante is going to drive her home. I don't know, I really don't. I'm definitely team Dante, and I want Seth and Amy to end up together. AND, I'M HOPING FOR A KISS! Please, please update as soon as you can. We all know how busy you are though, but please try to give us a rocking update! Thank you so much, you're an amazing author, and again update!
Alright, this is my favorite story on Fictionpress. I'm not exaggerating, or lying. This is really my favorite story. I would have wanted to see more face-to-face drama between Dante and Cassidy this chapter, but the drama with Laurita definitely made up for that. I think that in the next chapter Dante is going to drive her home. I don't know, I really don't. I'm definitely team Dante, and I want Seth and Amy to end up together. AND, I'M HOPING FOR A KISS! Please, please update as soon as you can. We all know how busy you are though, but please try to give us a rocking update! Thank you so much, you're an amazing author, and again update!
2/17/2013 c29 unthought known
I've just read all 29 chapters tonight. I am totally hooked. I was going to review after each chapter but didn't want to stop reading to do it. Amazing work, loved it!
I've just read all 29 chapters tonight. I am totally hooked. I was going to review after each chapter but didn't want to stop reading to do it. Amazing work, loved it!
2/17/2013 c29 Pseudonym59
Jeez. I was not expecting that from Laurita... I'm pretty sure it kills the chance of her and Dante ending up together, thereby increasing the chance for Dante and Cassidy to end up together. :) Even so, I can't help but feel sorry for Laurita. It's what's great about your writing. Even if you aren't necessarily rooting for a certain character, part of you wants them to have their happy ending.
Jeez. I was not expecting that from Laurita... I'm pretty sure it kills the chance of her and Dante ending up together, thereby increasing the chance for Dante and Cassidy to end up together. :) Even so, I can't help but feel sorry for Laurita. It's what's great about your writing. Even if you aren't necessarily rooting for a certain character, part of you wants them to have their happy ending.