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8/1/2012 c26 Enter Username
I can't handle your story! It's so hard for me to deal with the heart-wrenching plot and all the horrible emotional turmoil both Cassidy and Dante have been through. I hurt just thinking about the things Cassidy’s thought and done. Their relationship is so addictingly painful… I just can’t. And then Cassidy’s encounters with Kingsley and her family and Kari and Amy and Seth and then Laurita’s presence and Cassidy just keeps SMILING and laughing at things she shouldn’t be laughing at and she pretends like it’s all okay; it’s just so draining because when I’m reading I put myself in the place of the protagonist and I can’t be Cassidy, ever! It’s like I keep suffering from heartbreak that’s not even mine over and over again! I would be wallowing tremendously in the open and crying and cursing Dante’s existence and my existence and asking him WHY WHY WHY and then I’d transfer to another school because the only way I’d be able to get over him (which I think she needs to do, either that or be with him. Of course the latter is much more preferable, but right now she's at that inbetween state which must be killer) is to just surround myself with people that aren’t associated with him, such as Cassidy’s parents and Nicoletta and freaking Laurita and Dante himself, AHH. I know I sound crazy and now that I read this over I seem way more dramatic and influenced and insane than I originally thought. It’s easier to comprehend in my head, but I can’t exactly post a link to the inner workings of my mind. Okay so I’m sorry; I’m definitely NOT bashing or hating on your writing, I love it and BINF is my favorite story on all of FP, and Brown Eyes is stupendous of course, but I’m just letting you know what it does to me. Anyway the best writings aren’t ones that you can simply flip through without a stitch, at least in my opinion. Anyway I'm reviewing as anonymous because I originally was going to post this on your Formspring but ran into a dilemma (255 characters, you've got to be shitting me) and I would like to be off Anon so I could perhaps get a response but I'm rather embarrassed by how emotionally unstable I'm being. I don't even know if you're going to read this but I hooopppeee so! I’m raaaather looking forward to going into cardiac arrest from your next chapter! :)
MAYBE PERHAPS you could somehow respond via formspring somehow or not whatever i don't know just ah i can't even
8/1/2012 c26 debzxxx
This story is absolutely amazing! The writing is beautiful and the storyline is so frickin' good.
Can't wait for you to update! xo
7/31/2012 c26 4asheepiage
OMG! Your back, i thought you may have died or something! It's okay now though :D Because that chapter made up for it hehe :P Can't wait to find out what happens next! You are an amazing writer, keep writing! :D Update soon! asheepiage.
7/31/2012 c26 7AMessofPickles
Dang I read this all in one sitting (well...sort of. I took a few breaks in between to eat and sleep :P) and it's just an amazing story! Utterly fantastic and I've been loving all the characters. Especially from Cassidy and Dante.

I think what I really like the most is all the emotion. There's so much emotion in every interaction between them, but they don't have too much of a physical relationship. I kind of like that the most. Anyways, great great job and I'm excited to see Dante and Cassidy finally give their present to Claire! :D I think she'll appreciate it a lot :D

Update soon!
7/31/2012 c26 1rebecamontiel
I've missed this guys so much! And I feel old reading them again! But it makes me feel young just the same. I'll have to re-read everything to grasp the strenght of this chapter, but it's a sacrifice I'm willing to do. Thanks!
7/31/2012 c26 Choukou
I entirely forgot about this story. I even went back a chapter to see if it jogged my memory-it didn't. So I went back to the beginning, and guess who ended up bawling at work because it was just too sad? I am so glad that you will be picking this up again, because I am definitely curious to see how you will end this.

But I have a something to rant about first: how is it that EVERYONE that antagonizes Cass is beautiful, nice, well-liked, and only dislike her? I don't even know Laurita, and I hate her.

Other than that, I look forward to your next update! (which I hope is within the next week or so)
7/31/2012 c26 Monkebella
I cant wait to see how your writing style has changed, I definately see Cassidy as growing up in this chapter, it shows that she wants to learn, wants to fight for life although not quite there yet, hopefully her uncle's words will get to her. This is one of the few stories that I have had in my alerts for awhile now that I still read. What Cass and Dante have and who they are comes across easily on the page and I cant wait to find out what you have planned for them. Thanks!
7/31/2012 c26 Guest
Oh gods your writing is just simply perfect. I love every bit of this story. It reminded me of when I fell in love with "Baby, I'm Not Finished". I think you're doing a spectacular job. I just reread everything last night(I stayed up so late!) and picked up on details I forgot about. It's amazing how Amy and Seth are such good friends. I wish I had friends like that. I'm wondering what will happen between Dante and Laurita. I knew they were exes. What will happen now? Keep up the AMAZING work!
-XxAthena-MinervaxX (I couldn't log in because Fictionpress is being annoying on my phone. lol)
7/31/2012 c26 4Paige Cruz
I feel like my heart's been ripped out and run over by a lawnmower. But that's a good thing... I guess.

Thanks for updating! I know it's been a year, and I kind of got the character names mixed up at the start of this chapter (I thought Seth was Rick, lol), but s'all good. Thanks also for making my day. :)
7/31/2012 c26 CupsofTea
I don't think I can remember how to breathe. Okay. Psyching myself up here for a mental breakdown here *mutes voice and silently screams while running through up and down the carriage waving ipod around* Okay, part one of hysteria complete. I absolutely love this chapter! I mean, it totally threw me off guard and almost made me start sobbing and clutching at my chest in the middle of the train but you know that's what a good story is all about I guess. Laurita. I think...that I hate her. I don't think I was ever particularly fond of her before but now that Dante's being all cold and weird and stony-faced and this person just jumped out of the blue making Cassidy so upset (because who actually thinks that she's coping with this? I'M not even coping with it and I know that they're fictional characters who aren't actually real but I can't stop crying when I think about it) and he TOTALLY knows what it's doing to her. I love Seth! Oh he's so cute and slightly awkward sometimes but amazing. And when he was saying that he would be there for her always and Amy and him being so cute and basically couple-y. I can't handle the emotions. I've missed this story so much, I can't wait to see what happens! I love your slightly different writing style, it suits the new tone of the story perfectly. Basically, keep up the brilliant work and whooo yeah, I love it! xx P.W (ps: seriously, anyone who is interested in males and is currently reading this needs to check out Tom Daley and Max Whitlock. Even people who aren't attracted to men should google them. Damn those male Olympians and their perfection.
7/31/2012 c26 1DuchessYappingDog
Yay! I'm glad that you will be updating and completing this story in the near future. I have reread half of this story today, and whoo, what an emotional rollercoaster. But I love these stories that invoke deep feelings within me. I just, gah. Dante is such an idiot. He needs to say out loud whatever it is he wants to say instead of skirting around the topic. Or stopping when Cassidy shuts him up. Or he really needs to decide if he wants to ultimately be with Laurita or Cassidy because this "being with one girl but ultimately want to end up with another girl" thing doesn't work. Cassidy and Dante can't try it out again if he utterly destroys her heart one more time. At least, if I were Cassidy, and knowing he had the opportunity to pick between the two at a leveled playing field, and he chose the other, I don't think I could go to him in the end.
7/30/2012 c1 Mar
I adore this story. It's definitely one of my all time favorites. That being said, the whole "summer" thing and them breaking things off because they "love too much." Idk .. I don't buy it as much as if something had actually happened. When I was reading it I was thinking something huge had happened that they couldn't get past. That's not to say that the accident and them not being able to live without each other isn't believable or a good idea or anything, but I feel like it should've been bigger. Can't wait to see how this goes ! I love Dante 3
7/30/2012 c26 Sadiiztic
Well sorry to be a lurker but hey I'm making a change by a bit :P
I truly do love this story. Keep it up. Stories keep me sane and away from my reality but it's nice seeing or hearing about something that could happen or happened. This is the right kind of story I'm looking for. Just like ice cream :D
7/30/2012 c26 crystalhate
GO AMY! I completely adore Amy and Seth. When she snapped at the table and Seth dragging her away, it was almost ridiculous! And Rick is so confused. Haha! The story is getting hot especially with Laurita. Why did she transfer anyway? And all the way from Spain? Hmm. So thanks for the update! Really happy that you're gonna finish this story. It has been a whirlwind of emotions! :)
7/30/2012 c26 x-wonderstruck
i was so excited when i saw that you updated! this story is definitely one of my favourites ever! this chapter was awesome as usual, but i missed the cassie/dante interaction :( how many chapters do you think it will have left? please update soon :)
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