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5/14/2012 c2 clichelover
I am only reading Ch. 2 but so far it sounds amazing! I really recommend you put a COPYRIGHT STATEMENT in the beginning so that it will decrease the chance for PLAGIARISM! I would really hate to see this story removed! Please keep writing and updating this story is so good!
4/28/2012 c25 AbbeyXD
Ok I'm seriously confused. He's in love with Laurita but he won't leave Cassidy alone and he talks about loving Laurita but he loves we too! Does he want Cassidy back or not? And is he evn still with Layrita? I'm so frustrated! I really hope you update soon because I really want to know if they both want to get back together or not because so far the storys been good but extremely confusing- does he still want her back? Grrrr update! :D
4/24/2012 c25 njw5s
I LOVE this story, it's so good! And I love that you really are taking the time for everything to happen. But you haven't updated in almost a year :( I wish you would, I really want to know what happens.
4/22/2012 c25 3CreativeChick233
Dont rush this story just because others want you too! I think this story is VERY well done. I still dont know if she'll end up with Rick or Dante, and thats amazing. I like when an author has me guessin until the end :). PLEASE updzte sooon!
4/21/2012 c25 harlow196
please update!
4/19/2012 c25 zeeniya
when I say that its torturing me that you are not updating this story then you gotta know that im not saying this on a light vein.

Please. Please... make a move on this story.

No matter how much I try to take my mind off Dante and Cass I just come back thinking abt them again.

I know you said that you aint finishing this any sooner...

but the least you cud do is give us sum .. or Heck! atleast one update. I can never put into words how beautifully you've knit this story together...

each and everything is right in its place...

But I want to know what happens after the last scene.

so Please..

take out sum time.

God Bless You.
4/12/2012 c25 keep.me.a.secret
It's been 10 months...PLEASE UPDATE! I read this story ages and ages ago, and I read it again now but it still isn't finished!
4/11/2012 c25 3PurpleStrawberries15
Wow...I love it 3 gotta continue :)
4/1/2012 c25 S
There's NOTHING draggy about your story! I absolutely love it!

I know Dante and Cassidy are the protagonists but I'm really hoping she ends up with Rick :P he's just so much more cool and was never afraid to keep trying to be her friend, unlike Dante who was embarrassed as a kid.

In fact, if Laurita is coming in through the exchange program, it'll just work out for the best.

Please please update! If you're one of those authors who updates after forever, it's still better than being the writer who gives up on a story. So UPDATE! :)
3/27/2012 c25 1watergirl795
Please. . Update!
3/26/2012 c25 2xoletitgo
This story is simply amazing.

Please update soon!

It'll make my life I swear.
3/25/2012 c25 5Silent Grenade
I don't know what all those other reviewers are saying, but this story felt nothing like a drag. I FELT NO DRAGGING ON OF THE STORY IT WAS PERFECTLY PACED!

OH GOD! I had almost given up hope on finding good, not-terribly-mary sue-ish stories on this site, that were well tought out formatted and written.

AND THEN I FIND THIS AND IT FEELS LIKE I CAN BREATHE AGAIN OH LAWDY LAWDY THANK YOU JESUS!

I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON.

!
3/3/2012 c25 Alice in Wanderland
So. You haven't updated in...a while...

I do like this story; it's got good character delopement and depth. The plot is also a little different than just the average girl and boy love/hate relationship.

So. My constructive critiscism: Sometimes it's hard to follow what exactly is going on. You could probably describe a little more about the setting they're in, or who exactly the characters are talking to. It would also probably be a good idea to add some line breaks, or just do something like &&& or *** so that we know when it's a seperate part of the story. And sometimes I feel like something in the story contradicts another, so that it's not totally solid. However, this could be a good thing, because things in life rarely are solid, so that may just be making it a little more realistic.

One other thing - sometimes, I feel like there should be a little more foreshadowing of big things like that car crash; I don't feel like we got a whole lot of hints about it back in the first few chapters.
3/1/2012 c5 Alice in Wanderland
So this story has a pretty interesting plot so far, and I have a feeling that I'm going to like it, but what I don't understand is this:

How many years have Cassidy and Dante actually been apart? It's mentioned briefly in some places, but it's not totally clear to me.
2/19/2012 c25 Sayuri. J
aww, i'm almost sorry i found this story. it's been a long time since you last updated, and judging by the publish date, it doesn't seem to get updated that often. but i understand life gets in the way, i just hope it's in your plans to complete this story because it's so good!
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