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2/16/2012 c25 Flynn
Cool story :)

Seriously, go on!
2/12/2012 c25 The New Kid On The Block
Jeez Louise. I only read completed stories because I hate the wait. I didn't realise this wasn't finished. Damn you for making me wait! (in a jokey way). To be honest, it's nice you're developing their relationship... Only annoying that you're taking so frigging long to update it- this is why I only read completed one's. Ahahahaha. Anyways, keep up the fantastic work, but could you be fantastic a little quicker? Because I fear the next time you update, I won't be bothered to read it anymore. You've developed their relationship so well- and your grammar is really good. This story is really nice.
2/9/2012 c25 3Chocolate is Yummy
I really love how well written this all is and the character developments. I know that she'll end up with Dante, but my heart can't help but cheer for Rick. X] agh! Don't get me wrong, I love Dante too. just. UPDATE. please please. help me keep my sanity.
2/2/2012 c25 Fangalitious
I absolutely LOVE this FP! It's so good, I can't even believe it. While reading it, I was always thinking to myself, 'Thank goodness I don't have to wait for the next chapter like everyone else did'. And then I got here. Where I HAVE waited. So please don't make me wait too much longer; I'm not sure how long I can last! *insert dramatic sigh ;)* Please, please, PLEASE update this soon!
2/1/2012 c25 Shirese
I think this is my favorite and least favourite story at the same time. It such an emotional high and low I cant wait to see what happens while at the same time not wanting to. I'm confused about whether to love a character or not because of how deep they are, how much of real, raw experience and life you have in them. You have me at the edge of my seat crying because i want to experience a love like that while at the same time hoping i never have to. I'm just amazed at you writing skills you bring a person into your story. That being said could you please please update PLEASE! but at the same time take your time cause we want perfection lol. Also omg i cannot believe you would bring loilita over from spain in that exchange progam that is sooooo meaan to belle
1/27/2012 c25 5Magyk-Quills
Alrighty, I know I've said this before and I know how horrible writers block can get but UPDATE PLEASE? IM DYING HERE. No pressure.
1/10/2012 c25 whenallseemsdark
This is one of the best stories I've ever read! Are you going to finish it? I really hope you do! I love, love, love, LOVE, this story! Please update if possible!
12/29/2011 c25 Awesomeness
Wow this story is absolutely amazing! Love the characters and the plot! It's so deep and emotional some of the chapters had me crying my eyes out! Please update soon!
12/29/2011 c25 BismahX
Ahhh! This story is SO good! Please continue this-its reaaaally good! Ive never really read somethig so bittersweet yet so sad. I love both of the characters they r really strong and go really well with together. I hope it works out for them in the end though or else ill cry. No Im serious. (not that i havnt cried already..ahem) I hate sad endings & especially with a history like theirs, they really deserve to be together cause I dont know how they would survive without the other. But anyway, cant wait for the next chapter! Please update soon! :)

(Ahh again SO GOOD! Omgosh! xD)
12/16/2011 c25 blusoul-420
Hello :) I guess I'm a new reviewer, pretty much read this all in one go (okay, it took me a couple days, whateverr) and I'll just tell you what I admire about your story and what I think could improve. Hopefully it'll be somewhat helpful! What really draws me in is the emotion. I've read enough stories on here where the problems are resolved within such a short period of time, which leads one to question the reality of the situation. Dante and 'Belle' are so realistic, people who love each other SO fiercely that it hurts, they almost can't bear it. almost... but when they fight, they don't spare each other and when they're happy, it's like they've never been happier. Every emotion seems heightened when they're around each other. but that doesn't mean they don't make mistakes, or that they're incapable of having romantic feelings for others, its just that their own tortured love conquers all (haha what a cliche expression)

I just feel like the story is disjointed, and that you should separate scenes because sometimes it's difficult to pick out where one scene ends and another begins. Otherwise, please update soon!
12/12/2011 c25 mt
This story is so amazing! Please update soon :)
11/22/2011 c16 Rosedreamer101
right...there are way too many jumps in this story. i honestly don't understand why everyone loved this story so much. its way too confusing to understand, let alone love it. you need to work on the order of you chapters and stop jumping from time to time. or at least notify the readers that it was a flashback or something. and all the other bundles or confusions with nicollete and whats-her-face. right... and amy's ? crush on dante? i don't even know. you have way too much crapped mixed up in here. it's confusing.
11/22/2011 c15 Rosedreamer101
wait...wtf? im so confused. why is dante so...not caring that laurita is there? O.o and why is she even there? im soo confused. did you like take some chapters out or something?
11/22/2011 c6 Rosedreamer101
uhhh...im slightly confused. cassidy and dante used to be bestfriend until age 10. then he started to hate her? so...how does this spain girl fit in and the whole "we wanted each other" and "public couple" thing fit in? O.o
11/22/2011 c2 xAnonymousx
Wow, really funny. :) I got to admit the idea to have her responding to what's happening in the book in the context of what her friend is telling her is hilarious. I was smiling through out the whole part. You came up with a very unique way to introduce the main male lead and it was quite good; props to you.
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