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6/24/2011 c25 Choukou
Oh my goodness. I just plowed right through this story. They are so heartbreaking meant for each other. I love that you write with such intensity and that your characters are relatable. I admit I cried a few times, but no more than I actually laughed out loud because of your witty humor.

Also, I read your comments on how some people think you're moving too slowly through the story, but I think you're moving at just the right speed. I hate that authors plow through stories so that we never really know the characters or become engrossed in their lives. I actually feel like they are progressing along at a reasonable pace, nothing that would make me feel like I missed a vital point.

Anyway, this review has become extremely long, but I'm just so in love with this story.

Happy writing!
6/23/2011 c25 red
I absolutely love this story. Been reading it since it's beginning around chapter 6 or so (but stopped fictionpress because of schoolwork) Now that I have some free time, I came back to check on this story~ Are you still uploading chapters for this story? Do you have a planned date for when this story will be done?
6/20/2011 c25 DEAD
I think I just died!
6/19/2011 c25 too-cool-4-ya
This is absolutely amazing. Even if the update took too long, I don't care. It is still Awesome! i adore you hahaha that sounds creepy :P hope that u update soon :D willing to wait though :)
6/18/2011 c25 1RoxyCupcake
Please update soon :) It is such a good story :) I read your AN at the bottom about the development of their relationship, but are the ever going to get it together? They are so perfect for each other :) xx
6/16/2011 c25 3Seralen
:D :D I almost had a heart-attack when I checked my email and realize you'd updated. This chapter was awesome! I still can't decide whether I prefer Dante and Cassidy or Rick and Cassidy. They're both different yet in an odd way, the same. Still, Rick is cute and sort of gives off a carefree, safe feeling, and I bet he and Cassidy would work out if you decided to go that way too. I anticipate your next update! 33
6/15/2011 c25 nehie92
okay so ive read hundreds of books on fictionpress but theres something about this one. Its not just the plot (theres alot of amazing ideas on this site) I think its mostly the way you've captured the characters emotions making them feel like theyre feeling it. Also... i love how you're decriptive enough to give us an idea but not too descriptive to make the story boring and you leave some of it to our own imagination ! okay so im just begging you to PLEASE if you could just slightly hurry up and updat a new chapter ! this is the best story ever and i dont want to rush you but still ! I'm dying to know if cass and dante get back together. i will be living sleeplesss nights without an update soon so PLEASE!
6/15/2011 c25 frouwe
It's almost funny how you were on hiatus like a week ago. Then again, it'd been forever since you last updated this.

I agree completely with Dante and Cass needing time. I was even going to address that on my review before I read your author's note. I don't think they're ready to be together just now; there's too much baggage. I think they sort of need closure before they can try anything again.

This is why I like Rick so much. I think he can help Cass get her closure, move on for a bit, so that she and Dante can be together in the end.
6/15/2011 c25 2CityBlackOut
keep going keep going, i beg of you! Haha it's been a while since i've read your stuff and , although it's really not much(, it's great to be reading about Dante and Cassidy again :)
6/13/2011 c25 Dassidy 3
I reread this this week, and fell in love again. Cassidy and Dante NEED to be together! Please UPDATE SOON and MAKE IT HAPPEN (not rushing, take your time. But they have to end up together!)!
6/12/2011 c25 WishBlade
I've missed this story =] Wonderful chapter! To be honest, I cried a bit at the end (I know, I'm a wuss) =( I love this story so much, and Cassidy and Dante seem so perfect for eachother, but I wonder if they would work out again. I hope so, but we'll see. Like I said, wonderful chapter. Can't wait for more!
6/12/2011 c25 3aby pwn u
Wowwww. THAT WAS AMAZING! I know there's more but I just found this story and i fell in love! I can't even describe how brilliant it is! I love their characters and their personalities and specially the way Cassidy and Dante talk to each other! its absolutely PERFECT! The sad part though, is that while i was reading the very important and sad scene at the end, the ice cream truck passed by with its awful music *cringe* (u get sick when it passes by everyday). Anyways, i hope u get 2 finish this story! No rush for updates because quality takes time :) GREAT job! :O 3781 reviews! im not the only one that thinks you're brilliant!
6/12/2011 c25 elsa
I like Cass and Rick’s relation :) I wish Cass and Dante really move out in the end, I think that would be a great story, more original than a 'true love last forever' story. I'm just worried that it is not this story you have in mind haha! Still, I'm glad you write again!
6/12/2011 c25 ess3sandra
its hot when a man cries!
6/12/2011 c25 2thisfairytale
Oh gosh, that left me literally breathless and tearing up ): There were parts where i LITERALLY gasped or clutched my heart sort of thing ):

This. Is. An. AWESOME. piece of work! I'm usually not patient, so i was mucho reluctant to read this story 'cause it wasn't completed yet but damn, i was hooked right after the first chapter! Even if it was 3am in the morning and i had church the next day at 8am haha!

Thank you for such an amazing story! I liked that it wasn't so.. fluffy :D And who says puppy love's the only love that exists between teens? I just really really love this story so much even if i just finished reading it. I'm loving the pace of the story though :) So take your time! But please don't torture us tooo much ):

Again, i can't get this story out of my head so.. AWESOME JOB (THUMBSUP)
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