for Brown Eyes5/14/2011 c24 x
"Next update won't take… wow, has it really been five months? HAHAHA…"
Writers block?
"Next update won't take… wow, has it really been five months? HAHAHA…"
Writers block?
5/7/2011 c24 NoirQueen
Wow... Your story is just awesome! I really like Cassidy. She's really easy to relate to... Although I really want to see her with Dante soon. updates please!
Wow... Your story is just awesome! I really like Cassidy. She's really easy to relate to... Although I really want to see her with Dante soon. updates please!
4/29/2011 c24 pleasssseeeeee
honestly! 50 years from now, if you havent finished this story yet, i will still check fictionpress for any of your updates! that is how badly and desperately i want you to finish this story! im hardcore dedicated :D so please, it doesn't have to be any time soon, but please dont leave this story! we love you, and your such a great author, and seriously this story is probably my favourite, so you can probably understand why im being a bit cucko so please!
honestly! 50 years from now, if you havent finished this story yet, i will still check fictionpress for any of your updates! that is how badly and desperately i want you to finish this story! im hardcore dedicated :D so please, it doesn't have to be any time soon, but please dont leave this story! we love you, and your such a great author, and seriously this story is probably my favourite, so you can probably understand why im being a bit cucko so please!
4/19/2011 c24 wormapplelove
nyaah! no!
please don't leave us hanging! update soon!
I read this whole story from start to finish (chap. 1 to 24) way back in Dec. last year, and am dying to know what will happen next!
brilliant story by the way! i love all the drama and humour, and the characters and ah - the drama (a story isnt really complete without drama :D) Its one of my fave. stories in fictionpress! and all your other stories are wonderful too! thankyou for sharing your talent with us all! you are awesome! yay!
BUT
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
hehe... thankyou very much!
lotsa love!
nyaah! no!
please don't leave us hanging! update soon!
I read this whole story from start to finish (chap. 1 to 24) way back in Dec. last year, and am dying to know what will happen next!
brilliant story by the way! i love all the drama and humour, and the characters and ah - the drama (a story isnt really complete without drama :D) Its one of my fave. stories in fictionpress! and all your other stories are wonderful too! thankyou for sharing your talent with us all! you are awesome! yay!
BUT
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
hehe... thankyou very much!
lotsa love!
4/15/2011 c1 OrangeLegs
Please update soon, I am dying here. And I think I'm speaking for everyone, haha!
Please update soon, I am dying here. And I think I'm speaking for everyone, haha!
4/9/2011 c24 YoMommaBiatch
rick + cass = love.
I want them to end up together, not cass and dante.
love the story.. UPDATEE SON!
rick + cass = love.
I want them to end up together, not cass and dante.
love the story.. UPDATEE SON!
4/3/2011 c24 leavemeialone
Please update. This story is pretty awesome. I didn't expect all those twists and turns that you provided. I was just expecting a boy hates girl and in reality he had a crush on her. But, I couldn't have predicted him leaving her and her summer and accident. I like how this story is in a way different yet still similar to others in this genre. I like seeing Rick's character and hearing a briefly of his past. I like and hate Belle's stubbornness. I like how Dante keeps pushing and pushing her. It's funny how every time I read Dante's name, I think of Dante's Inferno (Hell).
Please update. This story is pretty awesome. I didn't expect all those twists and turns that you provided. I was just expecting a boy hates girl and in reality he had a crush on her. But, I couldn't have predicted him leaving her and her summer and accident. I like how this story is in a way different yet still similar to others in this genre. I like seeing Rick's character and hearing a briefly of his past. I like and hate Belle's stubbornness. I like how Dante keeps pushing and pushing her. It's funny how every time I read Dante's name, I think of Dante's Inferno (Hell).
3/30/2011 c24 valpal4630
wow, so i was in love with BINF and it was written to amazingly good that i HAD to read this story as well and i have to say that i LOVE this story even more than BINF, which i cant even believe.
this story is too cute, words cant even explain. i cant wait to see how this turns out. BINF was a favorite, and now so is this story and you!
btw, im spanish and i was born in Valencia, Spain :) its so cool that dante used to live in Spain :)
wow, so i was in love with BINF and it was written to amazingly good that i HAD to read this story as well and i have to say that i LOVE this story even more than BINF, which i cant even believe.
this story is too cute, words cant even explain. i cant wait to see how this turns out. BINF was a favorite, and now so is this story and you!
btw, im spanish and i was born in Valencia, Spain :) its so cool that dante used to live in Spain :)
3/30/2011 c24 princessxx
ah this story is so cutee :D:D i hoep you will update it soon hahah ;) at some parts of the story i got confused but i still like it ^^ i love the cute moments when dante thinks cassidy is beautiful and when he gets jealous ahahha ^^ i like it how cassidy doesnt know she is beautiful but she seems like it becuase she certainly got the attention of rich and dante who seems really hot LMAOOAM i think cassidy is so cute when she hits them ahahah at teh begnning of hte story i thought she always got bullied so she was a sad lonely kid but it turns out she is actually a strong girl :D i hope at the end it would be a happy ending ^^ or ill be sad ahhaha :D reading your short stories now and i just wanted to write a review for this before i start them
ah this story is so cutee :D:D i hoep you will update it soon hahah ;) at some parts of the story i got confused but i still like it ^^ i love the cute moments when dante thinks cassidy is beautiful and when he gets jealous ahahha ^^ i like it how cassidy doesnt know she is beautiful but she seems like it becuase she certainly got the attention of rich and dante who seems really hot LMAOOAM i think cassidy is so cute when she hits them ahahah at teh begnning of hte story i thought she always got bullied so she was a sad lonely kid but it turns out she is actually a strong girl :D i hope at the end it would be a happy ending ^^ or ill be sad ahhaha :D reading your short stories now and i just wanted to write a review for this before i start them
3/30/2011 c24 
3Thulia
Okay so I know I dont need to mention how good this story is, or what an amazing
writer you are, because both things are highly obvious.
and I hardly ever leave reviews untill author has completed the story.You know what's
coming right? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SON.(if you don't you are
putting my sanity at risk. Yea I'm trying to guilt trip you.IS it working?)
BYEXBYE.
3ThuliaOkay so I know I dont need to mention how good this story is, or what an amazing
writer you are, because both things are highly obvious.
and I hardly ever leave reviews untill author has completed the story.You know what's
coming right? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SON.(if you don't you are
putting my sanity at risk. Yea I'm trying to guilt trip you.IS it working?)
BYEXBYE.
3/28/2011 c24 AllTheWayUp12
Heh. I did not get some parts in the story. I even had to get back from previous chapters in attempt to understand it (but it was an epic fail).
But I LOVE Dante and Cassidy and their complex personalities.
When I read the first few chapters, I thought Dante was the bully. And that he just completely forgot how they used to be. But then... You made Dante more complex than that. Unlike some other stories I've read, his character stagnated in a way that he was able to progress. Do I make any sense? Hell, I don't even know.
Cassidy... Well, she's the kind of character that I get and don't get at the same time. It's like I knew why she and Dante broke it off in Summer but I still don't understand. Heh. If you question my sanity, I don't blame you. But hey, I'm speaking my mind. And that's what this review is for right?
STILL. Will you please kindly explain how the hell Dante and Cassidy's relationship works? PLEASE. I'm younger than you think. So... if I would understand something based on my experience, I'd probably be dumb. I observe. From different perspectives. What the hell am I talking about? Do you still get me? HAHA. Sorry. :)
Heh. I did not get some parts in the story. I even had to get back from previous chapters in attempt to understand it (but it was an epic fail).
But I LOVE Dante and Cassidy and their complex personalities.
When I read the first few chapters, I thought Dante was the bully. And that he just completely forgot how they used to be. But then... You made Dante more complex than that. Unlike some other stories I've read, his character stagnated in a way that he was able to progress. Do I make any sense? Hell, I don't even know.
Cassidy... Well, she's the kind of character that I get and don't get at the same time. It's like I knew why she and Dante broke it off in Summer but I still don't understand. Heh. If you question my sanity, I don't blame you. But hey, I'm speaking my mind. And that's what this review is for right?
STILL. Will you please kindly explain how the hell Dante and Cassidy's relationship works? PLEASE. I'm younger than you think. So... if I would understand something based on my experience, I'd probably be dumb. I observe. From different perspectives. What the hell am I talking about? Do you still get me? HAHA. Sorry. :)
3/7/2011 c24 3Seralen
I keep reading this over and over every month. It's just so good, how you portray your character's emotions and how Cassidy's character is unique; believe me, I've been around Fictionpress and seen a lot, but one like hers I haven't. I can't wait for the new chapter! 8D Yeah, which means you need to update. 'Cause you have hundreds of readers waiting in anticipation.
3SeralenI keep reading this over and over every month. It's just so good, how you portray your character's emotions and how Cassidy's character is unique; believe me, I've been around Fictionpress and seen a lot, but one like hers I haven't. I can't wait for the new chapter! 8D Yeah, which means you need to update. 'Cause you have hundreds of readers waiting in anticipation.