for Brown Eyes2/18/2011 c24 crissy19
god i love this story. im goona have to reread it when im off of work this monday!
god i love this story. im goona have to reread it when im off of work this monday!
1/27/2011 c16 D
ok nvm that last review i gave...sorry, but r the chapters outta order? 0...o
ok nvm that last review i gave...sorry, but r the chapters outta order? 0...o
1/27/2011 c15 D
i really like your story dont get me wrong but i feel that there are missing parts to this story...like the time lapse between each scene is too big...from a basketball game then directly into summer...
i really like your story dont get me wrong but i feel that there are missing parts to this story...like the time lapse between each scene is too big...from a basketball game then directly into summer...
1/27/2011 c24 
13GossamerSilverglow
This is amazing! Please update soon. I really would like to know what Cass did to break Dante's heart. Did I miss it? All she did was get in an accident and then ended up in a coma. How is that intentionally hurting Dante? I'm really upset that Dante fell in love with someone else, I understand it, but it's not right. I'd also like to know why Kari doesn't like Cassidy...you were hinting around at that towards this last chapter. Please more Dante/Cassidy. How could he fall in love with someone else when he loved Cassidy so much? I'm really angry about that! Well,thanks for writing.
13GossamerSilverglowThis is amazing! Please update soon. I really would like to know what Cass did to break Dante's heart. Did I miss it? All she did was get in an accident and then ended up in a coma. How is that intentionally hurting Dante? I'm really upset that Dante fell in love with someone else, I understand it, but it's not right. I'd also like to know why Kari doesn't like Cassidy...you were hinting around at that towards this last chapter. Please more Dante/Cassidy. How could he fall in love with someone else when he loved Cassidy so much? I'm really angry about that! Well,thanks for writing.
1/18/2011 c24 Pseudonym59
"In the end, I stood up silently, and hoped she knew she was going to get what she rightfully deserved." Crap, what is she going to do?
To be honest, I'm kind of (read really) hating Nicoletta and Kari. They're both bitches who don't deserve an ounce of the worship they recieve. Ugh. Payback would be nice - or some clarity.
Dante. Dante. Dante. Dante. Dante. Why must they push each other away?
Great chapter!
"In the end, I stood up silently, and hoped she knew she was going to get what she rightfully deserved." Crap, what is she going to do?
To be honest, I'm kind of (read really) hating Nicoletta and Kari. They're both bitches who don't deserve an ounce of the worship they recieve. Ugh. Payback would be nice - or some clarity.
Dante. Dante. Dante. Dante. Dante. Why must they push each other away?
Great chapter!
1/16/2011 c24 Alixermixer
This story is somethin special. I hope that Cassidy and Dante get their act together. With Francesca going to Spain, you just know who is going to come in her place and as soon as that happens, it is going to bust the biggest hole inn the main characters relationship.
This story is somethin special. I hope that Cassidy and Dante get their act together. With Francesca going to Spain, you just know who is going to come in her place and as soon as that happens, it is going to bust the biggest hole inn the main characters relationship.
1/15/2011 c24 1Sunshine xox
This is such an amazing story! You are an amazing author!
I started reading and I just couldn't stop until I read everything...
Please update soon! I want Dante and Cassidy together but I have a feeling Rick might be making a love triangle...
1Sunshine xoxThis is such an amazing story! You are an amazing author!
I started reading and I just couldn't stop until I read everything...
Please update soon! I want Dante and Cassidy together but I have a feeling Rick might be making a love triangle...
1/9/2011 c24 Guest
so many reviews! girl ur on a roll!
keep up the good work!
(that means update soon btw :P)
so many reviews! girl ur on a roll!
keep up the good work!
(that means update soon btw :P)
1/4/2011 c24 Frozen.by.Sloth
I'm not sure what is it with you and heartbreaking stories. They're so beautiful and intense and have the potential to be the happiest pieces of literature ever - but they're just so painful.
Sometimes, I remember that description of the teenagers surrounding them after they blew up - like their lives were suddenly void of happiness. Seriously, perfect description.
I get so mortified and stunned I feel like I'm going to be crying the next few years. Then it starts being beautiful and giddy and happy and it's perfect. The balance is mindwrecking.
I'm afraid of reading your stories. Seriously - I am. Both "Baby, I'm not finished" and this start out... normally, and spiral out of control. It's seriously heartbreaking.
I don't know how to explain it - it's not that I don't believe in love, it's not santa claus - but I never believed it could happen to me. Or people I knew. Not intense love, anyway. Maybe tame, I'm-used-to-you love. But after reading your stories, even emotionally stunted as I am, it's the first and foremost thought on my mind.
And I hate reviewing for you because I'm never sure I'm making any sense, you know, haha? I either feel like I'm worshiping you too much, or like I'm cursing you, or like I'm just embarrassing myself :)
A constructive criticist (is that a word?), I'm not.
I just babble and ramble like I'm drunk.
(That's the best apology I can give for being the suckiest reader and reviewer ever, haha)
I just hope that this ends with a happy ending. And not like Baby, I'm not finished.
Because, to be honest, I think that the ending of that story just doesn't work. I felt like I was reading about completely different characters - a completely different story. Somehow, it was as if the whole story led to a breaking point that went nowhere because of the time leap. But I guess it was still a happy ending.
This story will break my heart if they don't grow old together.
Plus, what the fuck is Kari's problem? I was starting to think she was supporting Cassidy, in some sort of backhanded way, but now that theory seems ludicrous.
And Nicolette's just confusing me. After Amy's comment, it crossed my mind that Kari and her were lovers, but since Nic warned Cass off Dante, that's just confusing.
Everything's confusing me. I can't wait for more. To understand everything about Laurita and Dante. He can't have loved her that much if he's still dying over Belle. And they weren't THAT good together, obviously. Unless she died (which she hasn't, I suppose, since he wants to make her visit), their relationship is also a mystery to me.
I don't know if I'm reading too much into everythig, but I'm just... Hoping to see it unravel. Into a happy ending :)
So, anyway. After this crack-pot of a review, I'm not sure how to wrap it up :D
Anyway, I'm really enjoying this, and thanks for sharing it :)
Keep up the great work. And I hope the next chapter really does take less than, er, half a year.
:)
Cheers.
I'm not sure what is it with you and heartbreaking stories. They're so beautiful and intense and have the potential to be the happiest pieces of literature ever - but they're just so painful.
Sometimes, I remember that description of the teenagers surrounding them after they blew up - like their lives were suddenly void of happiness. Seriously, perfect description.
I get so mortified and stunned I feel like I'm going to be crying the next few years. Then it starts being beautiful and giddy and happy and it's perfect. The balance is mindwrecking.
I'm afraid of reading your stories. Seriously - I am. Both "Baby, I'm not finished" and this start out... normally, and spiral out of control. It's seriously heartbreaking.
I don't know how to explain it - it's not that I don't believe in love, it's not santa claus - but I never believed it could happen to me. Or people I knew. Not intense love, anyway. Maybe tame, I'm-used-to-you love. But after reading your stories, even emotionally stunted as I am, it's the first and foremost thought on my mind.
And I hate reviewing for you because I'm never sure I'm making any sense, you know, haha? I either feel like I'm worshiping you too much, or like I'm cursing you, or like I'm just embarrassing myself :)
A constructive criticist (is that a word?), I'm not.
I just babble and ramble like I'm drunk.
(That's the best apology I can give for being the suckiest reader and reviewer ever, haha)
I just hope that this ends with a happy ending. And not like Baby, I'm not finished.
Because, to be honest, I think that the ending of that story just doesn't work. I felt like I was reading about completely different characters - a completely different story. Somehow, it was as if the whole story led to a breaking point that went nowhere because of the time leap. But I guess it was still a happy ending.
This story will break my heart if they don't grow old together.
Plus, what the fuck is Kari's problem? I was starting to think she was supporting Cassidy, in some sort of backhanded way, but now that theory seems ludicrous.
And Nicolette's just confusing me. After Amy's comment, it crossed my mind that Kari and her were lovers, but since Nic warned Cass off Dante, that's just confusing.
Everything's confusing me. I can't wait for more. To understand everything about Laurita and Dante. He can't have loved her that much if he's still dying over Belle. And they weren't THAT good together, obviously. Unless she died (which she hasn't, I suppose, since he wants to make her visit), their relationship is also a mystery to me.
I don't know if I'm reading too much into everythig, but I'm just... Hoping to see it unravel. Into a happy ending :)
So, anyway. After this crack-pot of a review, I'm not sure how to wrap it up :D
Anyway, I'm really enjoying this, and thanks for sharing it :)
Keep up the great work. And I hope the next chapter really does take less than, er, half a year.
:)
Cheers.
1/2/2011 c24 nK
your story is amazing.
i love how there is just so much going between cassidy&dante. the tension between them is just compelling, and this is just through simple words. the idea concept of loving your childhood best friend is indeed cliche but you make it different, standing out from the rest of other cliche stories.
what i love about this story also is, there doesn't need to be any sexual interaction between the two to feel their feelings for one another. i mean the closest they've come is hugging or sleeping together (not having sex, just sleeping)but the connection between the two is just so powerful; its beautiful.
throughout the chapters there's just so much going on but it works, can be a tad confusing but eventually the idea was bought aross.
i was so pulled in by the storyline, your characters and your way of writing; reminds me abit of my own style haha
can't wait for the next chapter, keep up with the awesomeness :D
your story is amazing.
i love how there is just so much going between cassidy&dante. the tension between them is just compelling, and this is just through simple words. the idea concept of loving your childhood best friend is indeed cliche but you make it different, standing out from the rest of other cliche stories.
what i love about this story also is, there doesn't need to be any sexual interaction between the two to feel their feelings for one another. i mean the closest they've come is hugging or sleeping together (not having sex, just sleeping)but the connection between the two is just so powerful; its beautiful.
throughout the chapters there's just so much going on but it works, can be a tad confusing but eventually the idea was bought aross.
i was so pulled in by the storyline, your characters and your way of writing; reminds me abit of my own style haha
can't wait for the next chapter, keep up with the awesomeness :D
12/30/2010 c19 28Robin Leigh
Oh, I love this chapter! I think it'll be my favorite. :) There's just so much chemistry..and they're so perfect for each other. I love it. :D
28Robin LeighOh, I love this chapter! I think it'll be my favorite. :) There's just so much chemistry..and they're so perfect for each other. I love it. :D
12/30/2010 c24 Nerilka
Are you going to write Laurita into the story? It seem like a good time that she should come in now..
Are you going to write Laurita into the story? It seem like a good time that she should come in now..
12/29/2010 c1 Cynthia
hello there!
I just read this... well I read all of your one shots and this. I don't normally review but your stories are AMAZING and I couldn't not write and let you know that. I hope you update soon, I'm dying to know what happens next.
xx
hello there!
I just read this... well I read all of your one shots and this. I don't normally review but your stories are AMAZING and I couldn't not write and let you know that. I hope you update soon, I'm dying to know what happens next.
xx