for Brown Eyes11/24/2010 c23 Aenigmatic
This has left me stumped. I've been taken on such a ride after devouring all the chapters in a manner that can't be too good for my eyes!
Your characters are overwhelmingly good, layered and complicated - there is a believability to them - though the relationships (well, just my opinion anyway) are sometimes unnecessarily strung out for my liking. I'm just not sure if I feel sufficiently convinced that it was too great a love, or feeling too deeply that tore them apart in the accident. But then, call me shallow in wanting to reinforce the myth of romantic love. ;)
There is so much left unsaid (quite literally) and while I'm waiting for some immense declaration of undying devotion - which Cassidy can't put a stop to - I'm quaking in fear and wondering if it'll take months (or even years, seeing as the story began in 2006!) to come! :)
I can't wait to read more. Put me out of my misery and tell me there will be lots of drama/over-the-top confessions and patching up.
This has left me stumped. I've been taken on such a ride after devouring all the chapters in a manner that can't be too good for my eyes!
Your characters are overwhelmingly good, layered and complicated - there is a believability to them - though the relationships (well, just my opinion anyway) are sometimes unnecessarily strung out for my liking. I'm just not sure if I feel sufficiently convinced that it was too great a love, or feeling too deeply that tore them apart in the accident. But then, call me shallow in wanting to reinforce the myth of romantic love. ;)
There is so much left unsaid (quite literally) and while I'm waiting for some immense declaration of undying devotion - which Cassidy can't put a stop to - I'm quaking in fear and wondering if it'll take months (or even years, seeing as the story began in 2006!) to come! :)
I can't wait to read more. Put me out of my misery and tell me there will be lots of drama/over-the-top confessions and patching up.
11/21/2010 c23 k
update quickly please.
update quickly please.
11/17/2010 c23 Georgia
LOVE THIS STORY SO SO MUCH. I should have been studying for my geography exam but somehow reading this is just SO much more appealing/entertaining :D Dante and Cassidy frustrate me so much but I love them and Seth and Amy are gorgeous X) The characters are so real and I love Cassidy's attitude, it's pretty kick-ass. I really can't wait for the update! You're an amazing writer.
LOVE THIS STORY SO SO MUCH. I should have been studying for my geography exam but somehow reading this is just SO much more appealing/entertaining :D Dante and Cassidy frustrate me so much but I love them and Seth and Amy are gorgeous X) The characters are so real and I love Cassidy's attitude, it's pretty kick-ass. I really can't wait for the update! You're an amazing writer.
11/14/2010 c23 Angelxoxo13
Your story seriously gave me a massive headache that I had to take some drug to tone it down. If you made a bold flashback word before you back to memory lane, it'll be much appreciated, ya know to prepare my brain not racking to pinpoint what what's going on before I/we read the story. I read from start till chap 23, my brain get this agony *lol,just kidding. Well may be a lil.* to make everything I read make sense. Sigh , great story though. Soo~ what's exactly in store? Coz ya know, we havent 'meet' closely with that spanish girl, what's her to Dante? Now I the headache get back~! Where's the story lead to? We already know this teens are made for each other. Oh ya btw, you made me cry on 'Summer' chapters. They're so...painfully love each other. Ya know that coma part. What's Rick problems? And btw you made me think Seth is gay! Shock horror I know! Lol love your story. Hugs!
Your story seriously gave me a massive headache that I had to take some drug to tone it down. If you made a bold flashback word before you back to memory lane, it'll be much appreciated, ya know to prepare my brain not racking to pinpoint what what's going on before I/we read the story. I read from start till chap 23, my brain get this agony *lol,just kidding. Well may be a lil.* to make everything I read make sense. Sigh , great story though. Soo~ what's exactly in store? Coz ya know, we havent 'meet' closely with that spanish girl, what's her to Dante? Now I the headache get back~! Where's the story lead to? We already know this teens are made for each other. Oh ya btw, you made me cry on 'Summer' chapters. They're so...painfully love each other. Ya know that coma part. What's Rick problems? And btw you made me think Seth is gay! Shock horror I know! Lol love your story. Hugs!
11/8/2010 c1 Faux Reves
I absolutely adore your story and won't give a proper review 'cuz God knows you've got enough of them. Instead I will ask you a question. How is this a humor? It made me f*ing cry! ... other then that, love it!
:)
I absolutely adore your story and won't give a proper review 'cuz God knows you've got enough of them. Instead I will ask you a question. How is this a humor? It made me f*ing cry! ... other then that, love it!
:)
11/8/2010 c23 Ha'lunga
HURRY UP AND UPDATE OR ILL EAT YOUR TOES AT NIGHT, PLEASE.
HURRY UP AND UPDATE OR ILL EAT YOUR TOES AT NIGHT, PLEASE.
10/30/2010 c23 
16non.graceful
Love how you're still dweling on the issue between Cas and Dan... not much authors do that- they just get to all the lovey dovey bull crap.
I do like. Descriptive and very very interesting. This story has quality
16non.gracefulLove how you're still dweling on the issue between Cas and Dan... not much authors do that- they just get to all the lovey dovey bull crap.
I do like. Descriptive and very very interesting. This story has quality
10/24/2010 c10 Tetsone fuu
i greatly despise cassidy's mother for being so blind and allowing her to be tortured. Darn her mother! Darn her! I'm good. :)
i greatly despise cassidy's mother for being so blind and allowing her to be tortured. Darn her mother! Darn her! I'm good. :)