for Brown Eyes8/31/2010 c23 WishBlade
Ah, I want to know what Amy is hiding! Loved the chapter (Although the fact that Dante was MIA is sad), thanks for updating =]
Ah, I want to know what Amy is hiding! Loved the chapter (Although the fact that Dante was MIA is sad), thanks for updating =]
8/31/2010 c23 
1xXkittykatt
I fell in love with Baby, I'm Not Finished a while back. It's an amazing story and I love Sydney and Oliver, but for some reason I was hesitant to read Brown Eyes. Then I figured if it had over 30 review, it had to be worth reading. So I did and now I don't know which story I love more! One things for sure, you are an incredible writer.
I have a dreaded feeling that Laurita will be showing up soon. I'm not sure if that will be a good or bad thing. I really don't think that Dante is in love with her. He may love her as a close friend, but I think it's clear that he's still in love with Cassidy. Anyways, can't wait to read the next chapter. Hopefully there will be more Cassidy/Dante action? XD
1xXkittykattI fell in love with Baby, I'm Not Finished a while back. It's an amazing story and I love Sydney and Oliver, but for some reason I was hesitant to read Brown Eyes. Then I figured if it had over 30 review, it had to be worth reading. So I did and now I don't know which story I love more! One things for sure, you are an incredible writer.
I have a dreaded feeling that Laurita will be showing up soon. I'm not sure if that will be a good or bad thing. I really don't think that Dante is in love with her. He may love her as a close friend, but I think it's clear that he's still in love with Cassidy. Anyways, can't wait to read the next chapter. Hopefully there will be more Cassidy/Dante action? XD
8/31/2010 c23 13youngin-matomon
ugh I really hate it when u end chapters with a cliff-hanger. please update fast because I want to finish this story: it's kinda breaking my heart :)
still. loved it!
There's one thing that I don't really understand though. In your other stories the characters talk in really philosophical manners and stuff. But in this one... they act normally. I'm not getting it. As in, what your style of writing is. It's confusing but not a big deal: care to elaborate?
Thanks
13youngin-matomonugh I really hate it when u end chapters with a cliff-hanger. please update fast because I want to finish this story: it's kinda breaking my heart :)
still. loved it!
There's one thing that I don't really understand though. In your other stories the characters talk in really philosophical manners and stuff. But in this one... they act normally. I'm not getting it. As in, what your style of writing is. It's confusing but not a big deal: care to elaborate?
Thanks
8/30/2010 c18 too-cool-4-ya
hi :D another awesome a=chapter as usual :D when i heard about the student exchange thing to Spain i immediately thought about Laurita :) is she going to be the exchange student? can't wait for the next few chapters. sorry if this seems familiar it's just because i posted it in the wrong chapter and spelt laurita's name wrong so sorry :)
hi :D another awesome a=chapter as usual :D when i heard about the student exchange thing to Spain i immediately thought about Laurita :) is she going to be the exchange student? can't wait for the next few chapters. sorry if this seems familiar it's just because i posted it in the wrong chapter and spelt laurita's name wrong so sorry :)
8/30/2010 c23 too-cool-4-ya
hi :D another awesome a=chapter as usual :D when i heard about the student exchange thing to Spain i immediately thought about Lauretta :) is she going to be the exchange student? can't wait for the next few chapters
hi :D another awesome a=chapter as usual :D when i heard about the student exchange thing to Spain i immediately thought about Lauretta :) is she going to be the exchange student? can't wait for the next few chapters
8/30/2010 c23 oxBlueEyes15xo
how do you manage to consistently keep my interest. Who knows, maybe because you rock at it. This chapter was great, some answers are obviously going to be answered soon. Can't wait. More soon.
how do you manage to consistently keep my interest. Who knows, maybe because you rock at it. This chapter was great, some answers are obviously going to be answered soon. Can't wait. More soon.
8/30/2010 c23 RealDreams
Ah! That was too good! I realy am so curious to know why Kari dislikes her and what the nerve that Cass hit in Amy! Omg! Haha. I missed Dante/Cass moments in this chapter! AND OMG don't tel me that the exchange student from Spain is none other than the homewrecker! Hahaha kidding :) can't wait for it tho if it is! To se Cassidy's reaction! I love jealousy! I only hope Dante gets even more jealous if you plan to do something w/ Cassidy and i dk... RICK haha! They're prety cute, with all the flirting and stuff (: Kay now I'm ranting, I'm done. Haha! Loved the chapter
Ah! That was too good! I realy am so curious to know why Kari dislikes her and what the nerve that Cass hit in Amy! Omg! Haha. I missed Dante/Cass moments in this chapter! AND OMG don't tel me that the exchange student from Spain is none other than the homewrecker! Hahaha kidding :) can't wait for it tho if it is! To se Cassidy's reaction! I love jealousy! I only hope Dante gets even more jealous if you plan to do something w/ Cassidy and i dk... RICK haha! They're prety cute, with all the flirting and stuff (: Kay now I'm ranting, I'm done. Haha! Loved the chapter
8/30/2010 c23 J. C. Hunter
Hm. I wonder if in this version Amy will still like Dante. I realised i'm not quite sure about the plot anymore cause i still retain memories of the original. Lol. But oh well. There's not much Dante action here anyway so i shall wait till next time. But heh. I think your writing style can be more concise. You don't have to try and cram so much information like all of Cassidy's thought processes into the story. I think a lot of what you actually include are unnecessary and at some point it becomes a little too distracting and people might find it hard to remember what you're talking about in the first place. So.. UPDATE SOON. xD.
Hm. I wonder if in this version Amy will still like Dante. I realised i'm not quite sure about the plot anymore cause i still retain memories of the original. Lol. But oh well. There's not much Dante action here anyway so i shall wait till next time. But heh. I think your writing style can be more concise. You don't have to try and cram so much information like all of Cassidy's thought processes into the story. I think a lot of what you actually include are unnecessary and at some point it becomes a little too distracting and people might find it hard to remember what you're talking about in the first place. So.. UPDATE SOON. xD.
8/30/2010 c23 12All Over You
Laurita's going to be the new exchange student, isn't she? ISN'T SHE? Oh man, this story would get so much more interesting if she was in town.
12All Over YouLaurita's going to be the new exchange student, isn't she? ISN'T SHE? Oh man, this story would get so much more interesting if she was in town.
8/30/2010 c23 1Midnight113
Awesome chapter, I like Kari, she's an interesting character. I'm glad you updated too, looking forward to reading more!
1Midnight113Awesome chapter, I like Kari, she's an interesting character. I'm glad you updated too, looking forward to reading more!
8/30/2010 c23 1danni-loves-too-reid
i love it :) please update sooner, this time i forgot all about this story ! i want Dante to come in ! soon oh u shud make them kiss ain truth or dare or 15 mins in heaven or something ;)
1danni-loves-too-reidi love it :) please update sooner, this time i forgot all about this story ! i want Dante to come in ! soon oh u shud make them kiss ain truth or dare or 15 mins in heaven or something ;)
8/30/2010 c23 sappyromancelvr
wow. this chapter just totally confused me. time for a re-read. haha.
awesome quick update!
wow. this chapter just totally confused me. time for a re-read. haha.
awesome quick update!