for Lost Cause8/19/2015 c1 OscarJLaw
wish this story had more chapters,got and end.
god I love this.
And I especially love Deven but how clueless she is !
he's so protective over you dating anyone and so jealous
because he's in love with you.
god
wish this story had more chapters,got and end.
god I love this.
And I especially love Deven but how clueless she is !
he's so protective over you dating anyone and so jealous
because he's in love with you.
god
7/1/2008 c11 
2cbprice25
Ah, a new one?
I've just been rereading this; I really like it. The two perspectives work really well - and it's amazingly cute. I look forward to reading the next version as well.
2cbprice25Ah, a new one?
I've just been rereading this; I really like it. The two perspectives work really well - and it's amazingly cute. I look forward to reading the next version as well.
4/29/2008 c11 11UponAtlas
please im beggin you! the story is fabulous/great/excellent! please update as soon as possible, i love your story!
please...
im beggin you...!
11UponAtlasplease im beggin you! the story is fabulous/great/excellent! please update as soon as possible, i love your story!
please...
im beggin you...!
7/2/2007 c11 Guest
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6/28/2007 c10 alacrityandasperity
this is so cute! i can't wait to read more. please update it, if you're going to continue the story.
this is so cute! i can't wait to read more. please update it, if you're going to continue the story.
6/15/2007 c10 11UponAtlas
u haven't updated for 6 months-you sould be ashamed. lol. jokes. update reeal soon!
11UponAtlasu haven't updated for 6 months-you sould be ashamed. lol. jokes. update reeal soon!
6/2/2007 c10 literately.blonde
"...her personality sparkles like gold glitter under flourescent lights"
lol i totally heart this story! keep up the AWESOME work. it's so cute, 'cos i know this girl named shana who's dating a devon. shana and devon...shane and deven ;)
"...her personality sparkles like gold glitter under flourescent lights"
lol i totally heart this story! keep up the AWESOME work. it's so cute, 'cos i know this girl named shana who's dating a devon. shana and devon...shane and deven ;)
3/30/2007 c10 Anonymous
Aw! Shane is so sweet! Can't wait for next chapter!
Aw! Shane is so sweet! Can't wait for next chapter!
3/10/2007 c10 vocecara
Deven is so dense! Update! :)
Deven is so dense! Update! :)
1/31/2007 c10 A.H. Star
Aww, cute story! I really like it, please update again soon!
Aww, cute story! I really like it, please update again soon!