for White Picket Fence1/28/2007 c1 
30Charmed.imsure-Always
Every girls dream isnt it. A poem that depicts wat romace an desire hopefully lead up 2. I liked it!
30Charmed.imsure-AlwaysEvery girls dream isnt it. A poem that depicts wat romace an desire hopefully lead up 2. I liked it!
10/5/2006 c1 89Lady DreamWriter
The sweetest dream two people could have, to want to spend the rest of their lives together. I really hope that this works out for you, you deserve this. Great job.
89Lady DreamWriterThe sweetest dream two people could have, to want to spend the rest of their lives together. I really hope that this works out for you, you deserve this. Great job.
9/14/2006 c1 8You Make Me Smile A Lot
That was great. I don't really like romantic things, but this was an acception. P.s. Tanx for reviewing my poem^_^
8You Make Me Smile A LotThat was great. I don't really like romantic things, but this was an acception. P.s. Tanx for reviewing my poem^_^
9/2/2006 c1 2J.STEWART
Hey, I'm back.
I really like this poem. It's so sincere and heartfelt. Glad to have read this.
2J.STEWARTHey, I'm back.
I really like this poem. It's so sincere and heartfelt. Glad to have read this.
8/7/2006 c1 110Clayfoot
i haven't been on in awhile...hope you remember me. this poem is quite beautiful. really does a good heart-string-pulling.
110Clayfooti haven't been on in awhile...hope you remember me. this poem is quite beautiful. really does a good heart-string-pulling.
7/29/2006 c1 arcane devices
Long, descriptive and sweet. I'm short of words. Nicely done. I look forward to your next update. - ADD-san
Long, descriptive and sweet. I'm short of words. Nicely done. I look forward to your next update. - ADD-san
7/26/2006 c1 I Found Myself At 24
Great flow to this. I don't think it's as "little house on the prarie" as a first reading would have it seem though - "dirty little secret" and seeing her through the window? Hm...dunno, but that may just be me reading too much into it.
Great flow to this. I don't think it's as "little house on the prarie" as a first reading would have it seem though - "dirty little secret" and seeing her through the window? Hm...dunno, but that may just be me reading too much into it.
7/23/2006 c1 298Moon-Chaser
Very sweet. Beautifully written, I could imagin it all in my mind.
Keep it up.
298Moon-ChaserVery sweet. Beautifully written, I could imagin it all in my mind.
Keep it up.
7/23/2006 c1 dancingintherain
wow suprise ending twist, i like it! very cute and romantic =P
wow suprise ending twist, i like it! very cute and romantic =P