for Lie Rhymes With SelfDepreciating Parentheses3/15/2007 c1 
88Icthoid Matro Coselos
ah yes *beams with glee* this is good. this makes me smile... alot. i can't really start on what i like about it... so i won't. keep writing!
88Icthoid Matro Coselosah yes *beams with glee* this is good. this makes me smile... alot. i can't really start on what i like about it... so i won't. keep writing!
9/13/2006 c1 19Rhea Valente
Amazing! Man, you have so much skill and talent, argh! Its baffling! :D Dounle thumbs up and muy kudos to you! ^^
19Rhea ValenteAmazing! Man, you have so much skill and talent, argh! Its baffling! :D Dounle thumbs up and muy kudos to you! ^^
8/29/2006 c1 21Cornelius Talmadge
It was wonderful! Even though the first two lines didn't have to do with the poem it was funny so I liked it. I loved the stage left. It gives it out like a great drama unfolding.
21Cornelius TalmadgeIt was wonderful! Even though the first two lines didn't have to do with the poem it was funny so I liked it. I loved the stage left. It gives it out like a great drama unfolding.
8/19/2006 c1 18twistedtruths
That was so good, a perfect way to shake the words out of you. I love the title though...it really goes with the poem.(and no worries P!ATD and FOD are great! And so are their titles) I really liked the little poem thing at the begining, it rings so true for me.
18twistedtruthsThat was so good, a perfect way to shake the words out of you. I love the title though...it really goes with the poem.(and no worries P!ATD and FOD are great! And so are their titles) I really liked the little poem thing at the begining, it rings so true for me.
8/16/2006 c1 612simpleplan13
This isnt your best... I really like the beginning part... but the poem itself wasnt as poetic as your stuff usual is
612simpleplan13This isnt your best... I really like the beginning part... but the poem itself wasnt as poetic as your stuff usual is
8/7/2006 c1 63silentscreamer07
AH! Leila! I'm so sorry! I haven't reviewed this! *blushes* I haven't really been reviewing on here like I used to...I've kind of got an addiction to another site. *smiles big* But i won't mention that. hehe. Anyways...on to the review about the poem!
I love the title, and yes, your right it is a bit p!atd. (don't really listen to them, but I do know they have like the longest titles in the whole world!) But the title is awesome, and it fits really well with your poem.
Now, lets move past the title..and go on..:D
*wow* I know, I say that about everytime. But really *wow* I don't know what to say. You did really good with the writing, but in your poems there always seems to be something hidden in between the lines. And I love that...they just seem to be packed with meaning. And that really just makes it a great poem.
I loved the lines..
"To dream and hope how I used to/And then-(enter stage left)-here come the lies."
It just..I don't know, it was something different, it was really neat, made you feel like you were reading a play almost. In a sense, know what I mean? :)
Great job! I liked this poem :D Hope to see more posted from you soon! I miss you BUNCHES AND BUNCHOES O' OATS! I hope I get to see you soon! If not in Nov. then hopefully this summer. I love you tons! And hope to get to talk to you soon! Love yas! *Keep writing!*
~Britney
63silentscreamer07AH! Leila! I'm so sorry! I haven't reviewed this! *blushes* I haven't really been reviewing on here like I used to...I've kind of got an addiction to another site. *smiles big* But i won't mention that. hehe. Anyways...on to the review about the poem!
I love the title, and yes, your right it is a bit p!atd. (don't really listen to them, but I do know they have like the longest titles in the whole world!) But the title is awesome, and it fits really well with your poem.
Now, lets move past the title..and go on..:D
*wow* I know, I say that about everytime. But really *wow* I don't know what to say. You did really good with the writing, but in your poems there always seems to be something hidden in between the lines. And I love that...they just seem to be packed with meaning. And that really just makes it a great poem.
I loved the lines..
"To dream and hope how I used to/And then-(enter stage left)-here come the lies."
It just..I don't know, it was something different, it was really neat, made you feel like you were reading a play almost. In a sense, know what I mean? :)
Great job! I liked this poem :D Hope to see more posted from you soon! I miss you BUNCHES AND BUNCHOES O' OATS! I hope I get to see you soon! If not in Nov. then hopefully this summer. I love you tons! And hope to get to talk to you soon! Love yas! *Keep writing!*
~Britney
7/23/2006 c1 1Shiba-.-Sempai
Aii! Thank goodness you're back from vacation. How was it? Hope you had an absolute blast...
But I digress.
Loved the poem, but what you're saying better be hypothetical, because everyone knows what a fanfreekingtabulous writer you've become. *Wearily envious sigh of longing* If I had half of your capabilities, I'd being strutting around lyke "Yes, my children. Adore me. LOVE me. (Which makes it probably for the best that you're the one with the extreme talent, if only for the fact that people are safe from my hypothetical arrogance.)
I especially loved that last two stanzas(?). "(enter stage left)" Argh! The brilliance! And "But the truth set in, so I kissed it goodbye" *Squees at the awesomeness*
Out of curiosity, where does the poem above yours come from? Is that yours, too? I adore the funky punctuation - like e.e. cummings, only understandable.
Anywayz... hope to see you soon!
1Shiba-.-SempaiAii! Thank goodness you're back from vacation. How was it? Hope you had an absolute blast...
But I digress.
Loved the poem, but what you're saying better be hypothetical, because everyone knows what a fanfreekingtabulous writer you've become. *Wearily envious sigh of longing* If I had half of your capabilities, I'd being strutting around lyke "Yes, my children. Adore me. LOVE me. (Which makes it probably for the best that you're the one with the extreme talent, if only for the fact that people are safe from my hypothetical arrogance.)
I especially loved that last two stanzas(?). "(enter stage left)" Argh! The brilliance! And "But the truth set in, so I kissed it goodbye" *Squees at the awesomeness*
Out of curiosity, where does the poem above yours come from? Is that yours, too? I adore the funky punctuation - like e.e. cummings, only understandable.
Anywayz... hope to see you soon!
7/23/2006 c1 83bittersweet.season
Thsi was rather nicely written, with subtle angst and sad undertoens. Your words flow well and it very orinigal.good job.
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83bittersweet.seasonThsi was rather nicely written, with subtle angst and sad undertoens. Your words flow well and it very orinigal.good job.
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