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4/10/2008 c1 13Shasta Valentine

i had to review one more.

you incorporated my favorite things to write about in this one

death blood hope.


your execution was to perfection.

7/17/2007 c3 omgxsummer
omg i love these.

and the whole only two reviews thing made me angry.

so i reviewed.

heart you!
2/3/2007 c1 5Rainfall Complexity
I liked this. The rhyme scheme at random intervals, the detached thoughts that all seemed to tie together, and the short-sentence short-sentence flow gave it a kind of scattered, agitated fell to it, and I think the style just helped portray feeling even more. You did a very nice job on this poem, in my opinion.
12/6/2006 c1 Dormant Account
Hey Ana! Whoot, I got an account! Well I'd like to say I really like this poem. I like how it goes blood, to darkness, etc.


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