for poetry4/10/2008 c1 
13Shasta Valentine
ok.
i had to review one more.
you incorporated my favorite things to write about in this one
death blood hope.
again
your execution was to perfection.
-sv
13Shasta Valentineok.
i had to review one more.
you incorporated my favorite things to write about in this one
death blood hope.
again
your execution was to perfection.
-sv
7/17/2007 c3 omgxsummer
omg i love these.
and the whole only two reviews thing made me angry.
so i reviewed.
heart you!
omg i love these.
and the whole only two reviews thing made me angry.
so i reviewed.
heart you!
2/3/2007 c1 5Rainfall Complexity
I liked this. The rhyme scheme at random intervals, the detached thoughts that all seemed to tie together, and the short-sentence short-sentence flow gave it a kind of scattered, agitated fell to it, and I think the style just helped portray feeling even more. You did a very nice job on this poem, in my opinion.
5Rainfall ComplexityI liked this. The rhyme scheme at random intervals, the detached thoughts that all seemed to tie together, and the short-sentence short-sentence flow gave it a kind of scattered, agitated fell to it, and I think the style just helped portray feeling even more. You did a very nice job on this poem, in my opinion.
12/6/2006 c1 Dormant Account
Hey Ana! Whoot, I got an account! Well I'd like to say I really like this poem. I like how it goes blood, to darkness, etc.
^_^
Hey Ana! Whoot, I got an account! Well I'd like to say I really like this poem. I like how it goes blood, to darkness, etc.
^_^