7/24/2006 c1 169MallowsWins
A little too angsty for my tastes, but I liked it anyway. I think the first half is better than the second, though.

'suicide isn’t what kills kids these days;

No, no, its the sadness these notes deliver.

Thats a very clever (and bleak) line. I couldn't hear this sung, but I did like how descriptive it was. Well done.

Daze