for Children of Summer
1307/25/2006 c1 sylvia's syndrome
I really enjoyed reading this piece. I like the casual way such striking statements are put forward in this. It’s perfect for the poem, because it puts you in the mind of lazy summer days. I wish I could give you some of the constructive criticism you’re seeking, but I can find no fault with this. Keep up the good work!
I really enjoyed reading this piece. I like the casual way such striking statements are put forward in this. It’s perfect for the poem, because it puts you in the mind of lazy summer days. I wish I could give you some of the constructive criticism you’re seeking, but I can find no fault with this. Keep up the good work!