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8/15/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Marvelous. Marvelous sound. True, I read this aloud, and it sounds so forceful when spoken or read. Such a rush of feeling, sound and emotion. Supurb sound.
7/28/2006 c1 the thing from under your bed
Having read everything from camp I stand by my earlier statement that you are a magnificent writer and that your words are better than a good deal that have managed to become published. I throughly enjoyed reading them all and hope you continue to keep us posted should the need arise. Have Fun
7/25/2006 c1 sammy
your summary sounds so arrogant.
7/25/2006 c1 A bit of truth
You are nowhere near talented enough to praise yourself in your summary.
7/25/2006 c1 ode to a firefly
I wish I could write like that again. This reminds me strongly of my poems "All of Which Leaves..." and "Drowned." Go take a peek if you feel so inclined. =)

The only thing I didn't particularly like about this was the last line. It felt like it should've been separated from the last stanza because it doesn't really fit the rhythm, but it fits the theme.

‚ô•Christine

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