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6/5/2007 c1 10DarkBlysse
"I am an amber gem

held by Spartan women"-Love that metaphor and image.

"A fire

cleansed of all wild impurities,

I dance only in place

and only on cue."-THAT is my favorite part. It was a wodnerful way of describing fire as less-than-deadly and tame.
8/24/2006 c1 612simpleplan13
awesome personification.. i love it

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