for My Lonely Playground7/25/2006 c1 Elizabeth Bilberry
And I was feeling so hopeful for the little girl in your poem! The story you tell is very touching. Take care and continue writing.
EB
And I was feeling so hopeful for the little girl in your poem! The story you tell is very touching. Take care and continue writing.
EB
7/25/2006 c1 
2miss understanding
Poor girl. :-( The poem is very circular. I like how loneliness is conveyed, stirring memories of past disappointment. Well done.
xchoco
2miss understandingPoor girl. :-( The poem is very circular. I like how loneliness is conveyed, stirring memories of past disappointment. Well done.
xchoco