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9/21/2006 c2 1losthearts
Hey, its good..but i agree that its too short. lols
8/1/2006 c2 68Ildri
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! XDthat was really short.make it longer, and ill like it more!
7/31/2006 c2 8writerwithoutacause

i love it

mostly cause i love dramma

but good writing too lol
7/30/2006 c1 68Ildri
col!now, question:did you actually dye your hair purple?(if you did: sweet! i gotta see it!)(if you didn't: damn you!)
7/28/2006 c1 AccountKiller128938898
Heh, I really enjoyed reading this. The only thing that got me down was the length. You should really think about lengthining this out.If this is just a spur-of-the-moment kind of fic (like the ones I get all the time), and you simply wrote to get it out, without a storyline or anything, I suggest (from previous experiences) that you either take it down or write a storyline and continue. Ja~

- Psyten

P.S. I just bleached my hair and dyed it purple. ^^-
7/26/2006 c1 10do-i-exist
This piece is really short. I think that you should expand more on this, maybe write about social groupings at your school and how you are similar and different to people in these groups. You could also write about what exactly it is that makes you think that you're losing your sanity. This has the potential to be very interesting and well written. It just needs more detail.
7/25/2006 c1 8writerwithoutacause
good start!but way way too short.however u got me pretty hooked with like two paragraphs and that takes skill(lol) so good jobupdate!

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