for Poems of a soul lost8/25/2006 c18 
1Mosaic Stains
That lastr poem was very nice, and for but a few words summed up how precisely a person might feel once they actually are betrayed.
1Mosaic StainsThat lastr poem was very nice, and for but a few words summed up how precisely a person might feel once they actually are betrayed.
8/20/2006 c4 12Kurt Wagner
A review for 'Smile of Grace';
How is it you can create something so complete using so little words. I've tried and failed, but you always prevail. Well done dear, well done.
P.S I am truly honoured to be considered as such. Thank you. Oh, and yes, apparently I am more coherent drunk as opposed to sober. Leave it to me to be so ridiculous. *sigh*
12Kurt WagnerA review for 'Smile of Grace';
How is it you can create something so complete using so little words. I've tried and failed, but you always prevail. Well done dear, well done.
P.S I am truly honoured to be considered as such. Thank you. Oh, and yes, apparently I am more coherent drunk as opposed to sober. Leave it to me to be so ridiculous. *sigh*
8/17/2006 c15 1Mosaic Stains
Whoa! Ecstacy. Seduction.Wow! A bit different from your other poems. These show a sort of carnally mild desire, although carnal is never supposed to be mild...
1Mosaic StainsWhoa! Ecstacy. Seduction.Wow! A bit different from your other poems. These show a sort of carnally mild desire, although carnal is never supposed to be mild...
8/16/2006 c1 4Raymond Lamar Gilstrap
Great poem. Reminded me of a song/poem I wrote once called In The Mirror. I'll check out the rest later. Until Next Time . . . .
4Raymond Lamar GilstrapGreat poem. Reminded me of a song/poem I wrote once called In The Mirror. I'll check out the rest later. Until Next Time . . . .
8/16/2006 c13 1Mosaic Stains
Because I was unable to review seperately for each and every poem, I'm left to comment on this last one:Every last poem I read was exceedingly nice and moving. I especially like Whispered and Torrent skies. The both of them were the most moving and nice one. But Far From Me left me thoughtful for awhile. For sounded like unrequited love and yet unsaid, unselfish love if that makes any sense.
1Mosaic StainsBecause I was unable to review seperately for each and every poem, I'm left to comment on this last one:Every last poem I read was exceedingly nice and moving. I especially like Whispered and Torrent skies. The both of them were the most moving and nice one. But Far From Me left me thoughtful for awhile. For sounded like unrequited love and yet unsaid, unselfish love if that makes any sense.
8/16/2006 c9 Mosaic Stains
A very evocatively moving poem. I feel as if it shows the mirror to the inner soul within it.
A very evocatively moving poem. I feel as if it shows the mirror to the inner soul within it.
8/10/2006 c8 kiss the bruises
This poem confusses me, but it's not surprising: many things do. I like the last line a lot, "Threatened by perfect porcelain no more". I feel like the subject of this poem wants to be the doll, perfect and beautiful, even if the beauty is fake. In the hope for the beauty, the subject's mind becomes distorted, and anything more beautiful then they are becomes a threat.
Katrina
This poem confusses me, but it's not surprising: many things do. I like the last line a lot, "Threatened by perfect porcelain no more". I feel like the subject of this poem wants to be the doll, perfect and beautiful, even if the beauty is fake. In the hope for the beauty, the subject's mind becomes distorted, and anything more beautiful then they are becomes a threat.
Katrina
8/8/2006 c10 Mosaic Stains
Unselfish love. A person who is in love with the other person and still is willing to give them away to someone else. Especially if it means the other person could be happy or happier. That to me is the meaning of true love, and I believe that is what you were trying to portray.
Unselfish love. A person who is in love with the other person and still is willing to give them away to someone else. Especially if it means the other person could be happy or happier. That to me is the meaning of true love, and I believe that is what you were trying to portray.
8/6/2006 c7 37shackled
Its hard deciding which one was my faviorite, they were all so incredably worded, but if I must choose I'd have to say Images is my favorite one. The wording in each one didn't seem forced or out of place, it all just flowed one line to the next. Very peaceful, if not a bit sad, reading.
37shackledIts hard deciding which one was my faviorite, they were all so incredably worded, but if I must choose I'd have to say Images is my favorite one. The wording in each one didn't seem forced or out of place, it all just flowed one line to the next. Very peaceful, if not a bit sad, reading.
8/4/2006 c7 1Mosaic Stains
All of those poems were very nice, and sad. After the glass butterfly, I really like images and smile of grace. The two of them have an ethereal feeling to them. As if you're baring your inner self.
1Mosaic StainsAll of those poems were very nice, and sad. After the glass butterfly, I really like images and smile of grace. The two of them have an ethereal feeling to them. As if you're baring your inner self.
8/3/2006 c7 108Qzie
those were so good, and so sad... i really liked the ones about the butterfly and the last one especially. nice job.
108Qziethose were so good, and so sad... i really liked the ones about the butterfly and the last one especially. nice job.
7/29/2006 c2 1Mosaic Stains
I believe I like this one better than the first. I has such a sweet, sad melody to it. Like a drum of melancholy is what expresses this poem like story. Some say we express in our writing, which speaks emotion, our true self. I believe poets and artist express it more often than others, because they want to feel the aura of what they are practically creating.
1Mosaic StainsI believe I like this one better than the first. I has such a sweet, sad melody to it. Like a drum of melancholy is what expresses this poem like story. Some say we express in our writing, which speaks emotion, our true self. I believe poets and artist express it more often than others, because they want to feel the aura of what they are practically creating.