for Little Mill Girl11/16/2007 c1 
3Don't Cry Over Spilled Milk
I like this. I think you conveyed the emotions well-it painted a good picture for me.
3Don't Cry Over Spilled MilkI like this. I think you conveyed the emotions well-it painted a good picture for me.
2/9/2007 c1 criti-sized
This seemed like a well plotted poem. And a beautiful one at that. I really felt that the way you portrayed it was nice, and the slight sadness was apparent. I honestly think that you did great on this one.
This seemed like a well plotted poem. And a beautiful one at that. I really felt that the way you portrayed it was nice, and the slight sadness was apparent. I honestly think that you did great on this one.
12/23/2006 c1 1Mosaic Stains
This rings a very truthful tale, creating nice web of words, which makes this a nice poem.
1Mosaic StainsThis rings a very truthful tale, creating nice web of words, which makes this a nice poem.
12/22/2006 c1 49FaithMemory
hey you are the author of the week in the reviewers_found...
hehehe i love this work of yours... I NEED FREEDOME too!
49FaithMemoryhey you are the author of the week in the reviewers_found...
hehehe i love this work of yours... I NEED FREEDOME too!
11/17/2006 c1 14letsdotheraindance
Hey. Im not really into reading historical stuff but i liked this one. :) The rhyming was great && the shot itself had a meaning. Wonderfully written and the poem isn't marred in any way. Awesome!
- Hannah
14letsdotheraindanceHey. Im not really into reading historical stuff but i liked this one. :) The rhyming was great && the shot itself had a meaning. Wonderfully written and the poem isn't marred in any way. Awesome!
- Hannah
10/23/2006 c1 17TrueToMyself
Nice! I really enjoy reading historical works, poetry or prose. This is interesting, the way you portray the little girl and her personality. If I was going to give you a suggestion, I'd say the ending is a little... un-ending-ish. (See how professional I sound?) I mean, it sounds like it could go on. But overall, this really is a wonderful, and original, piece.
17TrueToMyselfNice! I really enjoy reading historical works, poetry or prose. This is interesting, the way you portray the little girl and her personality. If I was going to give you a suggestion, I'd say the ending is a little... un-ending-ish. (See how professional I sound?) I mean, it sounds like it could go on. But overall, this really is a wonderful, and original, piece.
8/11/2006 c1 Gabby
Aw this makes me sad. Not only because its a kinda sad poem (not to mention beautiful) but I feel like such a lazy arse, back in S.S. I'm sorry.
Man...I promise you, when 8th comes I'm gonna stop crying and be one of the smartest people in the class! :3
Aw this makes me sad. Not only because its a kinda sad poem (not to mention beautiful) but I feel like such a lazy arse, back in S.S. I'm sorry.
Man...I promise you, when 8th comes I'm gonna stop crying and be one of the smartest people in the class! :3
8/3/2006 c1 Muted Dragon
hey i studied them a while back. i like the common idea of 'what you see isn't what's underneath' applied to an individual most would forget to put in poetry. very nice.
hey i studied them a while back. i like the common idea of 'what you see isn't what's underneath' applied to an individual most would forget to put in poetry. very nice.