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2/9/2007 c1 criti-sized
I hope you don't mind my honesty on this poem. I ndersdtand that this was supposed to be your personal poem, but I kind of didn't feel the emotions in it. To me, some of the words seemed a bit forced, but other than that it was great.
11/29/2006 c1 89Lady DreamWriter
Again powerful words. Strangely heartbreaking, but also up lifting as well. You can almost see what is going on as you read.
10/23/2006 c1 17TrueToMyself
This has very nice emotions and word choice. :) There are too many lines that I like to quote them here! Remarkably, for a rhyming poem, there are only a few lines that seem forced. I'm going to read some more!
8/3/2006 c1 Muted Dragon
aw. good emotional analysis of the stigma and meaning of tears. and i learned what a schnook was. XD

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