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1/8/2013 c1 Dandy352
Been there. Done that. It just happens. You think it would go on forever. But then things happen and boohoo all hopes are gone. It's life as we know it.

It's a nice poem :)
3/15/2007 c1 4Walking Catastrophe
It was very smooth, easily read. Good job on this one!

Cherry
2/20/2007 c1 7yarrowicefrost
I liked it. Very to-the-point.

The lines "The battles we faced,

We never lost" and 'You helped me spark" were amazing.

Thank you for the review and putting it in your favourites. Made my day. :-D
12/24/2006 c1 1addicted2cocoa
Aw, a really sweet poem.
12/23/2006 c1 1Mosaic Stains
A lovely poem. I like the last two lines of how they end with a final note. Bearing a hint of grief and yet that hope of seeing the person once again. And how you used the repeat line of 'With you forever' to a certain thought. The wording also helps add to the soft emotions carried in this poem.
11/29/2006 c1 89Lady DreamWriter
Wow. Heartbreaking and powerful. I'm sorry for your loss. These kind of friendships are the rarest and the most rewarding. Your words are very powerful and well chosen.
10/23/2006 c1 17TrueToMyself
Aw... so sad, so touching... I could never write something like this, even if I tried.
7/26/2006 c1 7littlepenwoman
I lost my best friend about four years ago... I still miss her. I can really relate to this. Nice, i'm adding to favs.

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