
4/4/2007 c1
14angel-Janna
Wow, very nice. love and hate and frustration all in one neat little piece of writing!
Keep it up, admirable stuff!
Janna
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Wow, very nice. love and hate and frustration all in one neat little piece of writing!
Keep it up, admirable stuff!
Janna
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2/16/2007 c1
78Ironic Presence
I feel similarly, but not quite.
I liked your choice of words. 'delicious and terrible'... 'poison'... it just made it become more alive. I don't think it's perfectly real, though... it sort of seems a little imagined. But, good. keep writing.

I feel similarly, but not quite.
I liked your choice of words. 'delicious and terrible'... 'poison'... it just made it become more alive. I don't think it's perfectly real, though... it sort of seems a little imagined. But, good. keep writing.
7/27/2006 c1
4Imalefty
wow, love it! it's really powerful.
i really love the italics; i think they add so much to the piece.
it's short, but it gets the mood across perfectly. good job!
-Lefty

wow, love it! it's really powerful.
i really love the italics; i think they add so much to the piece.
it's short, but it gets the mood across perfectly. good job!
-Lefty
7/26/2006 c1
30Puella Caeli
wow, this is so, so poignant and beautiful. i think i know this feeling, to need him but also hate that you need him because you don't have him, and... just, wow. lovely work here.

wow, this is so, so poignant and beautiful. i think i know this feeling, to need him but also hate that you need him because you don't have him, and... just, wow. lovely work here.