for Never Heard8/19/2006 c1 
112VIKKI NEMORIE
Wow! I really enjoyed this story. The point of view caused me to stumble in the beginning, but in the chapters it started to flow better and I became accustomed to it. You have made the 'fortress' captivating and intruiging. I hope you continue w/ the story!
112VIKKI NEMORIEWow! I really enjoyed this story. The point of view caused me to stumble in the beginning, but in the chapters it started to flow better and I became accustomed to it. You have made the 'fortress' captivating and intruiging. I hope you continue w/ the story!