
7/27/2006 c1
12elisefey
I'm not very good at reviewing poetry so I'll just say that I liked this and the images it conjured.

I'm not very good at reviewing poetry so I'll just say that I liked this and the images it conjured.
7/27/2006 c1
6Scarlet Black
I thought this was a very interesting concept, and I liked it, but I think it would have been better perhaps if more character was given to the bones, if that makes sense? It would have been more interesting to read if like you said at the end, they were more than "just bones".

I thought this was a very interesting concept, and I liked it, but I think it would have been better perhaps if more character was given to the bones, if that makes sense? It would have been more interesting to read if like you said at the end, they were more than "just bones".