7/27/2006 c1 63silentscreamer07
wow...lovely poem...so much emotion in it too..and I think that really added a lot to this. I love your rhyming too...I can never rhyme very well..it always seems "forced" almost..but this had such a nice flow, it was easy to read, I guess is the best way to put it.

"He loves me so and I know how its true, But then why do I remain in love with you?"

Great way to end this too..it leaves off with a question, which makes people think..*keep writing!* This was really good :D

~britney