for Two Weeks8/6/2006 c1 
19A. P. Eva
Amazingly written for a firt poem! It's one of those poems that keeps the reader wondering, I love poems like that. *favs*
19A. P. EvaAmazingly written for a firt poem! It's one of those poems that keeps the reader wondering, I love poems like that. *favs*
7/28/2006 c1 23firestar267
I think this is very good, especially for your first poem! Short but sweet. I really like how the words "allright" and "tonight" are echoed at both the begining and end of this and are the only words to rhyme, i really think it sets this off well. Good job - keep it up and write more!
23firestar267I think this is very good, especially for your first poem! Short but sweet. I really like how the words "allright" and "tonight" are echoed at both the begining and end of this and are the only words to rhyme, i really think it sets this off well. Good job - keep it up and write more!
7/28/2006 c1 10Brin Loo'kyoo Brate
Lovely.. ^^
But hey, post your sories, luv..You -know- you want to.. ;P
10Brin Loo'kyoo BrateLovely.. ^^
But hey, post your sories, luv..You -know- you want to.. ;P