for How?3/14/2009 c1 
6Kalista Jia
Your poems are so powerful. I am in love with them! They just express whatever I want to say in my stories! (*except the dude get on with his life*) _ I am so pissed half of my long review on "Answer the Phone" was cut! ! (I am too tired to retype the long review so I will summarize it) So yes, I will say it for the two poems: EXCELLENT JOB! I enjoy making the parallel between your poems and my type of stories(I write slash, hope you wont get disgusted by it) and (Yes, I love it when the guy rejects the person who likes him then later he regrets it. Regret! = LOve! )
6Kalista JiaYour poems are so powerful. I am in love with them! They just express whatever I want to say in my stories! (*except the dude get on with his life*) _ I am so pissed half of my long review on "Answer the Phone" was cut! ! (I am too tired to retype the long review so I will summarize it) So yes, I will say it for the two poems: EXCELLENT JOB! I enjoy making the parallel between your poems and my type of stories(I write slash, hope you wont get disgusted by it) and (Yes, I love it when the guy rejects the person who likes him then later he regrets it. Regret! = LOve! )
1/4/2008 c1 19Raleven
I'm such a sucker for rhyming and you're just so good at it! I find nothing wrong with this one. I like it!
19RalevenI'm such a sucker for rhyming and you're just so good at it! I find nothing wrong with this one. I like it!
8/4/2006 c1 15x-kit-x
Yep your right... a question that we all want answering. I like the simplicity of this poem, it's easy to read and flows nicely (always good!) and I like your writing style :D
15x-kit-xYep your right... a question that we all want answering. I like the simplicity of this poem, it's easy to read and flows nicely (always good!) and I like your writing style :D
7/28/2006 c1 5IanNicholasSomnia
Ooh... Good one. I really enjoyed it. Though I would change "Your never gonna look at me how I look at you." into "Your never gonna look at me, THE WAY I look at you.". To me it seems that suits the rythm better... But that's just me ^^.
5IanNicholasSomniaOoh... Good one. I really enjoyed it. Though I would change "Your never gonna look at me how I look at you." into "Your never gonna look at me, THE WAY I look at you.". To me it seems that suits the rythm better... But that's just me ^^.
7/28/2006 c1 75False Pretense
i can relate to this entirely. it's well written and it rhymes nice, too. keep writing!
aarahiti
75False Pretensei can relate to this entirely. it's well written and it rhymes nice, too. keep writing!
aarahiti