for Sins in Heaven6/26/2007 c1 
17Luny Loona
Not much to comment on. It's a good start, but try to remember not to centre your text unless it's a poem. It puts some people (like me) off.
17Luny LoonaNot much to comment on. It's a good start, but try to remember not to centre your text unless it's a poem. It puts some people (like me) off.
10/26/2006 c1 daughter-of-louis
Aw wonderful. I miss you! :[ All your stories are great-I havent been of FP in awhile now..school is bogging me down : [ I should have a web comic up within the next two months tho :D
I hope you continue this. I'm looking foward to it :D
Aw wonderful. I miss you! :[ All your stories are great-I havent been of FP in awhile now..school is bogging me down : [ I should have a web comic up within the next two months tho :D
I hope you continue this. I'm looking foward to it :D
8/31/2006 c1 Creative Destruction
Hm. I'm intrigued.
Hm. I'm intrigued.