for Good Girls Don't Play with Fire1/18/2017 c1 
10Emoddess
Ahhh this is really sweet and romantic! I'm a sucker for things like this haha and great job at creating this one! 3
10EmoddessAhhh this is really sweet and romantic! I'm a sucker for things like this haha and great job at creating this one! 3
5/27/2015 c1 A
This is just the fluff I needed ! Loved the two characters. The emotions were all in point. Nothing that makes you go , 'that will never never happen in real life. ' loved it !
This is just the fluff I needed ! Loved the two characters. The emotions were all in point. Nothing that makes you go , 'that will never never happen in real life. ' loved it !
2/12/2015 c1 Be-U-tiful
Aww this was so cute! Why doesn't this happen in real life?! Hahaha anyways I loved this :)
Aww this was so cute! Why doesn't this happen in real life?! Hahaha anyways I loved this :)
12/3/2014 c1 monika
I love this fluff with a capital L! I hope you write more stories like this one...
I love this fluff with a capital L! I hope you write more stories like this one...
9/2/2013 c1 1APassionForReadingAndWriting
I love this story! I like how the opposites (or rivals, as you said) fall for each other! Nice story! :)
1APassionForReadingAndWritingI love this story! I like how the opposites (or rivals, as you said) fall for each other! Nice story! :)
8/15/2013 c1 butterjar
Also here - s/3147619/1/You-Again
Also here - s/3147619/1/You-Again
8/15/2013 c1 4butterjar
Hey,
I don't know if you will see this message or not, but I just wanted to to let you know that someone is plagarizing your story on wattpad.
Link: 23167583-you-again#!p1
Just thought you would want to know.
4butterjarHey,
I don't know if you will see this message or not, but I just wanted to to let you know that someone is plagarizing your story on wattpad.
Link: 23167583-you-again#!p1
Just thought you would want to know.
6/17/2013 c1 2eslover
Great! Too bad it's a one shot :( I looked on your profile for more stories, hope to see some eventually :)
2esloverGreat! Too bad it's a one shot :( I looked on your profile for more stories, hope to see some eventually :)
10/25/2012 c1 l0ngl0st
Nicely done, although I kinda wanted more hints of Cole's feelings/the thought processes behind them. I mean, I guess they were intended for us to infer, but it still seemed kind of...disarming that he would still kiss her without getting to the bottom of why she "hated" him and all that. But good job! :)
Nicely done, although I kinda wanted more hints of Cole's feelings/the thought processes behind them. I mean, I guess they were intended for us to infer, but it still seemed kind of...disarming that he would still kiss her without getting to the bottom of why she "hated" him and all that. But good job! :)
7/21/2012 c1 Rosie
Hey there! Im Rosie from A Drop of Romeo and im happy to say that your story has been addedto our archive, under the category of one shot. Here's your review:
Rosie Thinks: This has to be one of my favourite one-shots on fictionpress that I've read many times before - so just imagine my excitement when I saw it sitting in my inbox! This story is just a bundle of great cliches, but maybe that's why I like it so much. The story starts off with "Charlotte Reese Emerson was scrubbing a urinal" and continues on to be just as funny and original (despite being cliche - adio kalinihta makes that possible).Reese is quick to anger but still very much a 'good girl'. Her feelings for Cole are complicated: she's jealous of him, annoyed by him, and yet has an annoying crush on him that she just can't shake. I love the depth of her feelings and how complicated they are - it made her into a more three dimensional character, despite this being a one-shot. I especially liked how Reese developed as a character towards the end. Cole also makes for an interesting character, with many facets of his personality displayed in the kalinihta has a great writing style with the perfect balance of dialogue and description. The allegories were inserted seamlessly into the prose and just added to the overall plot. This story makes for an easy, light read that is sure to leave you with a smile on your face.
Hey there! Im Rosie from A Drop of Romeo and im happy to say that your story has been addedto our archive, under the category of one shot. Here's your review:
Rosie Thinks: This has to be one of my favourite one-shots on fictionpress that I've read many times before - so just imagine my excitement when I saw it sitting in my inbox! This story is just a bundle of great cliches, but maybe that's why I like it so much. The story starts off with "Charlotte Reese Emerson was scrubbing a urinal" and continues on to be just as funny and original (despite being cliche - adio kalinihta makes that possible).Reese is quick to anger but still very much a 'good girl'. Her feelings for Cole are complicated: she's jealous of him, annoyed by him, and yet has an annoying crush on him that she just can't shake. I love the depth of her feelings and how complicated they are - it made her into a more three dimensional character, despite this being a one-shot. I especially liked how Reese developed as a character towards the end. Cole also makes for an interesting character, with many facets of his personality displayed in the kalinihta has a great writing style with the perfect balance of dialogue and description. The allegories were inserted seamlessly into the prose and just added to the overall plot. This story makes for an easy, light read that is sure to leave you with a smile on your face.