
11/23/2008 c2
1wikus
“You don’t look twenty-one,” the bouncer said, looking Jerry up and down.
“Of course I’m twenty-one,” Jerry winked flirtatiously, flipping the hair over his shoulder.
“Works for me, sweet cheeks,” the bouncer grinned lecherously, grabbed Jerry’s ass, and let them into the club.
HAHAHAHA, loved it.
I *heart* crossdressers, they amaze me. Or even those pretty feminine boys who look like girls and kinda act like girls but doesn't pretend they're girls, in a Bill Kaulitz way. I love both styles.
Fu*king moar, please.

“You don’t look twenty-one,” the bouncer said, looking Jerry up and down.
“Of course I’m twenty-one,” Jerry winked flirtatiously, flipping the hair over his shoulder.
“Works for me, sweet cheeks,” the bouncer grinned lecherously, grabbed Jerry’s ass, and let them into the club.
HAHAHAHA, loved it.
I *heart* crossdressers, they amaze me. Or even those pretty feminine boys who look like girls and kinda act like girls but doesn't pretend they're girls, in a Bill Kaulitz way. I love both styles.
Fu*king moar, please.
11/13/2008 c2
71Subbie
OH YAY FANART! I REALLY like this story, actually I love all crossdresing stories, they're so much fun to read. Maybe I'll attempt one one day, who knows!
Lee

OH YAY FANART! I REALLY like this story, actually I love all crossdresing stories, they're so much fun to read. Maybe I'll attempt one one day, who knows!
Lee
10/6/2008 c2
2NakedKing
hahaha i love how the bouncer slaps his butt...heheheh he OBVIOUSLY had him fooled...! XDD

hahaha i love how the bouncer slaps his butt...heheheh he OBVIOUSLY had him fooled...! XDD
5/11/2008 c2
1Kneecap
Ew, that bouncer was rank. What a perv.
Did he really look convincing? Wow! Go Jerry!
I thought it was funun! Yis! And so, I'm bored so I'l end this review, short as it is. But Rachael is col, yeah, love her.

Ew, that bouncer was rank. What a perv.
Did he really look convincing? Wow! Go Jerry!
I thought it was funun! Yis! And so, I'm bored so I'l end this review, short as it is. But Rachael is col, yeah, love her.
5/11/2008 c1 Kneecap
^^ It's cool so far. I liked the description of him being attacked by maascara!
Yis, yep, yes. Eyeliner and mascara are lovelyful. Yes, they most certainly are.
Erm, I liked the character? I can' treally think of much else to say at this point...onto the next chapter...
^^ It's cool so far. I liked the description of him being attacked by maascara!
Yis, yep, yes. Eyeliner and mascara are lovelyful. Yes, they most certainly are.
Erm, I liked the character? I can' treally think of much else to say at this point...onto the next chapter...
3/21/2008 c1
6Zyril
I love it! (Can't really top that right now, cause I can't wait to read the next chapter)

I love it! (Can't really top that right now, cause I can't wait to read the next chapter)
6/30/2007 c2 i-see-faeries
Haha. I don't know whether to be extrememly amused or disturbed. A little bit of both, I guess. ^^ Love it. Update!
Haha. I don't know whether to be extrememly amused or disturbed. A little bit of both, I guess. ^^ Love it. Update!
6/12/2007 c2
1spiked punch after midnight
SDKLJFDJK;. I love this to death. It just gives me this big warm fuzzy feeling. Jerry is adorable. I love guys in dresses. And making them all stereotypical is fun. I wish I was Rachel. Ah, this is so damn cute. :) It's been a while, but you uh, you should totally write more. :P It would be fabulous and like a party, and I could bring confetti and everything.

SDKLJFDJK;. I love this to death. It just gives me this big warm fuzzy feeling. Jerry is adorable. I love guys in dresses. And making them all stereotypical is fun. I wish I was Rachel. Ah, this is so damn cute. :) It's been a while, but you uh, you should totally write more. :P It would be fabulous and like a party, and I could bring confetti and everything.
4/27/2007 c2
1We Called Her Thalia
Funny that the stereotype works that way, because according to statistics (they're dirty liars, but what do I care?)seventy percent of cross-dressers are straight. Plus, a lot of them are navy marines, I'm sure of it. Or lumberjacks.
It's good. The story, that is.
It's also six o clock, my time, and I have nothing reviewer-ish to say.

Funny that the stereotype works that way, because according to statistics (they're dirty liars, but what do I care?)seventy percent of cross-dressers are straight. Plus, a lot of them are navy marines, I'm sure of it. Or lumberjacks.
It's good. The story, that is.
It's also six o clock, my time, and I have nothing reviewer-ish to say.
1/15/2007 c1 obsidiandreams
I like this chapter a lot! I like the way you set it up, and Jerry's character.
I like this chapter a lot! I like the way you set it up, and Jerry's character.
11/21/2006 c2 Jolene
This story is so cute! I like it a lot so far.
This story is so cute! I like it a lot so far.