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9/1/2006 c1 Please Deactivate
For content, this is a legitmate poem and the questions are something to be thought over if answered. For form, i think that if you are going to break up the questions into more than one line, you should stick to the same number of lines for each question. It is very prose-like which is how i write, so i have no problem with it, but perhaps you could skim the questions down a bit and still get your point across? Well, hope this helps you on your way!~Rose (overall, good job!)
8/22/2006 c1 87Chaos Apple
Oh...great! Fantastic! This really makes the reader think...even though, the narrator cites that as his downfall. Wonderful job.
8/7/2006 c1 1J'Adore Les Phoques
You're a boob. :P

No, this is good! I have also wondered this. I've never concluded my thoughts... maybe i should...
8/5/2006 c1 236mezzie
worth is a question we should all ask : )

mezzie
8/3/2006 c1 270dustytiger
wow, this is really good, really makes you think, it actually ties in to the book i'm currently reading (rising up and rising down) in a rather uncanny way, very well written, i really like it, definatly worth the wait thanx for the reviews!

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