for Decide8/1/2006 c1 flightless.bird
The first few lines aren't quite as good as the rest, but its all still very good. Something about the last line though... in my opinion the poem would be better without it, but thats just me. I love how the two lines near the very end rhyme! Over all though, it's a great find.
The first few lines aren't quite as good as the rest, but its all still very good. Something about the last line though... in my opinion the poem would be better without it, but thats just me. I love how the two lines near the very end rhyme! Over all though, it's a great find.