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10/19/2008 c1 102Aomera
This is lovely, creat use of repitition. I also love the itallics - I'm a fan of doing things like that in poetry, when appropriate. well done :)
2/3/2008 c1 164Lady Fingers
It's the paradox that puzzles me

The sheer vulgarity of grace

Its simple perfection

Weightless..

As the haze inside my head

beautiful

beautiful

beautiful
11/6/2006 c1 174Victor Joseph
i like the lines "I love you, though you taunt me/I love you because you taunt me"
10/8/2006 c1 48notthecreepyfatguy
Once again this is amazing. I cant believe that this is many poems fused into one, you put them together so perfectly.
10/8/2006 c1 511NothingMoreNothingLess
I love this.

"It's the paradox that puzzles me/The sheer vulgarity of grace/Its simple perfection"

"I know there's no magic here../Just spoken word,/a dull, monotonous sound that leaves me pining/For the enigmatic dreams of childhood/Where clouds were fairy kingdoms/Secrets and subplots,/Between the lines"

This is amazing.

Cassandra
9/20/2006 c1 15shadowcat86
Hm... good. I like it!

Very Angsty
9/18/2006 c1 10blue.eyes.can.be.deceiving
I liked this poem, it gives me a strange, but good feeling at the same time.. weird huh? ha. i know, i'm pretty weird myself. great job! keep writing!

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