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8/5/2006 c1 2miss understanding
Changing they'll never come home from the first stanza adds a subtle dischord to the poem's structure.

I like it. It's rather dark, but good. ;p Playing with words is fun.

xchoco
8/4/2006 c1 free-to-dream15
Wow..very nice touch putting the line "they'll never come home." in bold. Made it stand out more and have more effect. great job!

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