for Will I?8/9/2006 c1 katy
I LOVE the words you use in this poem. They are so descriptive, and in depth in themselves that they add a great learned feel to the writing. I dont like however how it ends with the Will I, i think maybe it should just stop after life and beauty, but that was just the feel that I got. I sometimes have a hard time ending my own poems, so I know sometimes it's hard to just stop one. But I loved it.
I LOVE the words you use in this poem. They are so descriptive, and in depth in themselves that they add a great learned feel to the writing. I dont like however how it ends with the Will I, i think maybe it should just stop after life and beauty, but that was just the feel that I got. I sometimes have a hard time ending my own poems, so I know sometimes it's hard to just stop one. But I loved it.