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8/3/2006 c1 858Anna178
damn. I'm not trying to be flattering at all when I tell you I love every single line in this poem. Everything from the tattered tablecloth to the really well done ending. Speaking of, love the emotion at the ending, it fits really well in my mind.

Even if I didn't know you, I'd think this was really good.

Again, you have talent with that flow concept that I just...don't. lol.

At one time I'd almost be envious. Good thing I'm over that stage, eh?


P.S. Simply put, I'm glad I know you.
8/3/2006 c1 19Angi3

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