for Rain Down Hell in Avidity8/26/2006 c1 a lonely september
there's just so much to it! and the way you end it. im just amazed right now...
there's just so much to it! and the way you end it. im just amazed right now...
8/5/2006 c1 Mos
Fucking georgeous. I am not kidding. The rythm and slant rhymes and everything of this poem is exactly where it is supposed to be. It's as if it was waiting to be written and you read it perfectly. Write more often. I miss your poetry.
Fucking georgeous. I am not kidding. The rythm and slant rhymes and everything of this poem is exactly where it is supposed to be. It's as if it was waiting to be written and you read it perfectly. Write more often. I miss your poetry.
8/4/2006 c1 sylvia's syndrome
The diction in this it amazing. It’s clever, it’s biting, it’s vivid, and it’s completely mesmerizing. I re-read this poem several times before I reviewed – I wanted to make sure I had soaked in every word. Keep up the great work!
The diction in this it amazing. It’s clever, it’s biting, it’s vivid, and it’s completely mesmerizing. I re-read this poem several times before I reviewed – I wanted to make sure I had soaked in every word. Keep up the great work!