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6/13/2007 c1 8the Berserker
This is in return for reviewing Clubbing at Fifteen, for which I am eternally grateful :D

I don't really understand why you put this story in your profile, too. It's a shame 'cause I read your profile first, so this is exactly the same...

Too short, and I don't think you understand the benefits of a comma, but not too bad. A good idea, you just didn't write it to the effect I expected of the plotline.

Still, I like it :)
9/19/2006 c1 1beloved18
i cant think of anything to write at the moment eh-,-' my mind is lank -,-' sorry !

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