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9/14/2007 c1 4jedihooplah
Thanks again for R'n'Rin' my story, so I'll return the favor. I like your technical description of this, though I think you tried to put to much tech together with not enough plot development. Springboard another longer story, say, about an entire campain perhaps, off of this general frame work and I think it will be much better.

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