8/5/2006 c1 2miss understanding
Your summary was quite different so I decided I had to see this! ^_~

I like it. It strikes me as Shakespearian, almost. It's witty, humorous, and a little silly.

"A tap to the teeth" - like this because it seems so random. XD

I also like "Non, -sense"

However, I will admit that this poem confused me a little. It would be nice if you included a helpful author's note for us people that don't speak French.

I'm sure it would help me understand the poem better. XD

xchoco