for Portrait1/7/2007 c1 
7gothic-allure
I really love the third stanza. It says the most to me. Overall, great poem!
7gothic-allureI really love the third stanza. It says the most to me. Overall, great poem!
1/3/2007 c1 15Point Zero
It's a really deppresing poem, but in a good way, I didn't find really anything wrong with, except maybe some tiny thing that no one in their right mind could find.
The only thing worth reading in my profile might just be the poems, but even I think they suck...everyone who's read "The Unhealing" (and by that I mean two people) has liked it. If you do decide to review some of my work than don't read the story "And I Remembered" one person has all ready voiced how bad they think it is.
Oh and this poem recieves a five out of five for deep emotion and deppresion captured into words...yada yada yada. GOtta go.
15Point ZeroIt's a really deppresing poem, but in a good way, I didn't find really anything wrong with, except maybe some tiny thing that no one in their right mind could find.
The only thing worth reading in my profile might just be the poems, but even I think they suck...everyone who's read "The Unhealing" (and by that I mean two people) has liked it. If you do decide to review some of my work than don't read the story "And I Remembered" one person has all ready voiced how bad they think it is.
Oh and this poem recieves a five out of five for deep emotion and deppresion captured into words...yada yada yada. GOtta go.
11/26/2006 c1 46Luma
Amazing imagery. The emotions are palpable, you convey them with such intensity.
~L
46LumaAmazing imagery. The emotions are palpable, you convey them with such intensity.
~L
11/9/2006 c1 20Fancy Gypsy Pants
sad, but incredible...possibly incredibly sad? either way i like it a lot! nice
20Fancy Gypsy Pantssad, but incredible...possibly incredibly sad? either way i like it a lot! nice