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8/6/2006 c1 73Jezsh
I like the way this is written, especially the second paragraph. Seems to express very well how a split second moment, something seemingly inconsequential, can have a huge effect on someone. One thing I didn't really like was the brackets in the first paragraph...I think there are too many and I found they interrupted the flow of the writing a little bit.Nice work anyway.

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