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8/9/2006 c1 65Nemonus
AW! That's fascianating...very nice. You quirky rhythm/rhyme sceme that one reviewer of the Advanced Equation remarked (at length...) on remains, but I think it's part of the way you are, and the poem does flow, if the reader is more interested in its flowing than its intricacies. I do not understand the line "The third of eight from a leather"; perhaps I am too much not a...whatever Jasper Fforde called those Shakespeare conspiracy theory people...see, I can't remember that either. Oh well. Very nice poem.
8/7/2006 c1 4Oomlot
I really liked the partial and repeating rhymes and your creative cadence. Good job!
8/7/2006 c1 not godwallop
A RING, posy of A RING. There's a space between the "a" and the "ring". Everyone knows this except my computer. Typical robot.
8/7/2006 c1 godwallop
is this a poem, or the posy of aring?

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