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11/28/2006 c1 Julian
Kinda liked this one... i thought it was cool.
11/10/2006 c1 8Elraralia
That was pretty interesting though I have to admit I was a little bit bothered by the fact that it should be "than" instead of "then".
11/1/2006 c1 78Ironic Presence
I liked it, but I think after a while, you could have gotten rid of, "is there something more in this world than just..." and had the same effect.
8/30/2006 c1 7firesword
deep my friend deep, not a great poem, but, heck what do i know.

Like it a lot all i will say.
8/13/2006 c1 92q is for quirks
"If we were logical, the future would be bleak indeed. But we are more than logical. We are human beings, and we have faith, and we have hope, and we can work."- Jacques Cousteau

you forgot hope. :)

good poem.
8/8/2006 c1 16Cheeseraptor5
It sounds like a very repetitive song. A lot of your points are well-made. But throughout the entire poem, you said "then" when you should have said "than". Good first stab at a poem, though.
8/8/2006 c1 17elderTopaz
hey friend, it seems depressing but its good and a little long but i get the idea or at least i think... some times i find life to be somewhat two dimensional. good poem though. ^_^
8/8/2006 c1 Darket
I did, and I really wish there were. THere's not a whole lot in this world. But if people really try we can find so much more, it's pretty rough when you look at it.

Peace

Darket

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